At the End of the Day - Comments

Update soon! I can feel the drama between Benn & Tyler starting to poke through...

I wonder how her meeting with her father is going to go? It's nice to see Tyler being caring towards her.

ooooh this is taking an interesting plot! got through first chapter! i will keep reading!

Aww nice chapter. It's nice to see a caring side of Tyler.

@ lostandfrustrated
Thank you so much! Such kind words! I wanted to expose details slowly rather than throw them on the audience all at once, so it's kind of like you learn alongside Tyler, and I'm still in the process - they don't even really like each other yet! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Just caught up with this story, and really looking forward to reading more! You have managed to build up the back story really well, and made the characters intriguing without being weak. Well done!

@tuukka.time
Your welcome!

@ livjackson
Thank you!

@ mp34
Thanks for the comments! I always look forward to reading them!

@ FootieJo
Thank you for your comments! Just now getting around to replying.. I'm always excited to see what you have to say!

@ grotesque bones.
Thanks! Feel free to let me know if I use a word that wouldn't be used or if I used it incorrectly! I wanted to have some diversity in characters.. still working on it!

@ Eberle14
Thank you so much! That's something I've been striving for, so it's really nice to hear! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Poor Ally she has alot to deal with. The only reason she told Tyler all of that was cos she just needed someone to talk to. I hope he doesn't act like an ass to her later on though.

Poor Ally the problems never seem to end and I think most likely she going going to help her sister pay. At least Tyler is being nice to her.

I just wanted to let you know I really love this story. It feels like this is all so possible. So many of these player fictions just don't feel realistic. This one does!

I just learned today that on the west coast we say, "mija", while on the east coast they say, "mami", which I find very interesting. It took me by surprise to see the term in chapter five. I liked it a lot. It's just an endearing term. Anyway, I'll really enjoying this story (originally I put storm, which is funny because that could be used to describe the mess of feelings Ally is finding herself in).

Marshall and cash betrayed Tyler lol and they are so cute. Tyler is probably going to mention to Jamie that she slept in his bed. Hopefully her dad gets the help his needs which I doubt otherwise she needs to let him go because she can't help someone who doesn't want help and wants to get better especially using her money for his drinking problem instead of paying rent.

Love it. The fact that he didn't care she was in his bed must be strange for Tyler. There's something there between them. Marshall and Cash OMG the dogs are so damn cute with her.

Catching up on this! Love, love, love!!!

at least she has the Sharps they're my fave! Strong girl to deal with Tyler shit!