At the End of the Day - Comments

Well at least she is going to spend her time with Marshall and cash without worrying about Tyler. Wonder how Tyler reacts or says about Jamie bluntly checking her out right in front of him.

Love it...

At least she gets to spend a week with Marshall and Cash. The little Sharp girls are super cute. Interesting Jamie checking her out. Wonder how Tyler would react? And nice to learn a little about her Dad.

Those little Sharp girls are adorable!!

"Glad we talked that out!" Yeah.. sure. lol. Well at least now she has permission to blare is sound system! Glad she doesn't take his shit and now he knows she won't. :) Can't wait to read more!

I thought he was going to be a asshole to her for walking in but I'm glad he wasn't. Lol of course Tyler says the song wasn't bad cause he is a JB fan. At least Marshall and Cash are keeping her company from the awkwardness that might happen.

Love the cheeky side of Ally!!

Interesting exchange between them. Ally sounds like she won't take any of his shit. At least he knows he was acting like an asshole. More soon please.

Agree with mp34!!!

Tyler and especially Jamie are total assholes for making those comments about ally. Tyler should have asked Patrick about what he meant about ally. Hopefully Tyler won't make dumbass comments like to ally.

I'm interested to learn more about ally! Hopefully Tyler won't be a ass to ally at least she Marshall and cash with her in house to keep her company.

Interested to learn more about Ally! Easily becoming my favorite story right now. Can't wait to read more.

Love to know more about Ally's background. Tyler should have asked Sharpie. Jamie and Tyler are such asses at the end. Hopefully Tyler opens his eyes and brain. Looking forward to more.

GREAT START CANT WAIT FOR MORE

Think Tyler and Ally around each other will make for interesting times.

Great introduction so far. I'm definitely excited to see how different Tyler and Ally are and how they may or may not get along... Please update soon!

Excited to read this!

I cannot wait to see how Ally and Tyler progress! I'm hoping there will be a few conflicts since they both seem like stubborn individuals.

Hey!

I would like to say that this seems really interesting. Funny, light introduction with a charming main character- Ally. I am looking forward to read more about the development of her character and the troubles that caused her to accept Tyler's offer.

Now, about Tyler. I find amusing the way that you are describing him. I can see him and Ally getting into some conflicts, but I have the feeling that your talent would make the scenes between them really entertaining.

Keep going, please! :)