Due South - Comments

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I'm really enjoying this story so far. It really reminds me of the show. (Even though that's what it's loosely based on). You got me hooked within the first chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter. I also kind of pictured the main character as Chloe. Not sure if you've watched the show or not but that's what she reminds me of. Second chapter was also fantastic. I'm looking forward to the next update. Hopefully soon!

I'm really sad. I wrote a comment for this but then Mibba ate it. -sigh- The one time I don't copy it. Oh well here it is again:

So let me say I love the alternative summary, the first one was more informative but the second one really added some comedic relief and if you didn't put that little note in the summary I would have definitely believed you were talking about her vag. The first chapter was great. It was prologue-y without being an outright prologue. It really lead into the story well and I liked how it went from after she met him then to the second chapter of when she met him. Both chapters give us the chance to feel out both characters and gives us a feel of how they'll interact together. You have a great way of describing things, and revealing the way she feels about Lucifer; her blatant disinterest is super funny since he's super interested.

Yesssss I love this story so much already, you have a really unique writing style. There were more times than not that I got caught up in the phrases you used and the way things were described, and it made reading this even more enjoyable because it has such a realistic feeling.
I like how the plot is coming along so far, and the character's personalities. The main character has a really cool personality right now, and I'm excited to see how they evolve. (I can't quite describe it, I really like their personality, though)
Love how it's turning out, can't wait for the next update!

screams!!! a Lucifer fanfic, omfg. okay fangirling over, time to go read it.