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I definitely think you should continue with this story, it's all just a bundle of mystery and I love the way you're going through with it

I'm really excited to see what happened in Breeze's past to make her so hostile towards everyone. I really like your writing style! Can't wait to read more, I was so happy when I saw you updated. awesome work!

Love this! I don't typically read Twilight fanfics, but I saw this one and checked it out. Back when Twilight was still a big thing, I was obsessed with it, so I sunk right into the plot from the first sentence. I really like how she's been away from the reservation most of her life, it adds a nice, homey touch to it when she returns and sneaks out to the beach. I really like this story so far!