April 11th, 2017 at 05:04pm
I'm really happy with how Cody played Jack off. He's kind of annoying though, like how does he not get the hint that Cody's not interested in him? Or maybe he does and just doesn't care. Either way I'm surprised Code hasn't just completely dumped him.
Travis is hilarious like always. I quite enjoy how he goes about doing things.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I feel like you've got something coming.
The party scene was done well. Cody interacting with other people that aren't the boys was interesting. It's easy to see that she's not 100% into it. And Travis saving her was wonderful.
I like how subtle he is too, and the fact that Cody somehow hasn't realized what she means to him.
I don't even want her to leave for break on account of Travis not being there.