Hurricane - Comments

Please continue this! It's one of the best stories I've read in a while!

I haven't read a good BDSM story in awhile, so I was really excited when I stumbled upon this gem! I like the dynamic between the characters and your descriptions (not just the sex ones). I kinda wish there was a characters tab because there are a lot of characters and I'm kinda bad at names. But I'm looking forward to what's around the corner and Clarie's (continued) introduction into the world of BDSM!

I thought I had commented but I guess I didn't. Whoops.

I absolutely love the way that this story was written, you go into great detail and I mean great detail, the main character is really well written. I didn't really look for errors, so I have nothing to say on that part.

The way you described the club was amazing, it's like I was able to actually picture it which I love reading in stories. It makes the story that more interesting.

I love how she's curious but being stubborn at the same time, like we all know she wants it but won't do it. When she woke up cuddled into him omg. Lol. Their relationship is already blooming and it's adorable. I mean she has the handsome club owner after her and wow.

I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

i just read all of the chapters! i'm really enjoying this story so far! i can't wait to read more.

i think i'd like to see amy and Sam next

I'm so ready for the action! This chapter was good and intense, I was reading it as fast as I could because I just needed to know that Clair would go back. I want her with Adam and only Adam but I could see her being pawned off. I like Jason so I would want more of Jason haha.

Please tell me you're updating again soon! So so so good! And I think I'd like to see a story about Jason!

@ viciousfeeling
Because being at the club doesn't necessarily mean being with him....It's his job as the club owner to not only recruit for his club and bring in members but to place them with partners they'd work well with. It also seems that he may be doing a bit of self torture, he likes her. He isn't sure she likes him but as long as she's at the club and he knows she's with someone who can treat her well and give her what she needs, he can be satisfied. Maybe? Also, in not being sure if she's interested in him or in his actions he's not going to force himself as her only Dom and not allow her the option to explore her newly found interest.

If Adam wants her at the club so badly why does he also want to pawn her off on someone else?

Super happy about this update!! they finally talked and Claire is heading right back to the club, the place where she belongs! Hopefully she'll get over whatever this is and accept Adam's offer and become his submissive! It's so obvious that she wants to and he wants her too!!! Ahhh, so excited for the next chapter!!!

Claire is such a relatable character. I get that 50 Shades vibe from this story for sure. I like that you make their emotions so clear and I totally get the whole, eager to see sense that Claire is throwing off. To be honest bro, the way that Adam spoke to Claire in the second chapter was hot. Like hot hot. What I would do to have someone talk to me like that. The way you describe their sexual interactions is amazing. Most people (including myself) do so poorly in describing sex but not you, this is incredible! I’m already dying for more. Like I need this story to go on forever at this point. I love your characters, and your writing style!

It was short but it was great! Claire needs to go back to the club and get over whatever the heck she is going though. She liked her time with Jason and she liked what happened. Call her Jason!!!!
Looking forward to your next update!!

Great update! The boys are to drool for. Especially Jason. I used to watch the show Grimm, so I have a thing for that actor. lol.

Great update! I really enjoy this story and cant wait to see where you take it!

@ January Rose
Hey thank you for the comment , but Adam is the owner hah, no biggie.Yea, I'll probably go through the few chapters up and edit them.Im so glad you like this story !

This is just too freaking good to be left un-updated. I low Claire, the confident, yet curious girl new to the world of BDSM. And there's Jason, a Master and the owner of the club. I really like the duo so far, and I cannot wait to see what you have in store for this!
Just a quick note, make sure you review and edit your story before publishing it. There was a few mistakes here and there, easily fixable though.
Can't wait for the next update!

Ah, this was a good chapter. I could envision it all. Great job.

Sorry I haven't commented in awhile! I've been caught up in my own story. Anyway, I've already read it, but I'm starting back at chapter 4 for this comment.

I was surprised by how quickly escalated! I really like the "chase", so it was definitely shocking when she gave in so quickly, right there in front of everyone.

There were a few typos, so you should read through the chapters a couple times just to catch those. Nothing major, though.

In chapter 5, I was surprised that he could pick up on the fact that she was lying about being with other men like that. Of course he's intuitive, but she was so willing that it seems more to me like he would assume she'd done that kind of stuff before.

Chapter 6 progressed even quicker, which kind of threw me off. It's really interesting, but I was hoping for more build up between Claire and Adam. Especially since they'll see each other outside of the club too!

I am absolutely in love with this story line! Well done

I seriously love how well you keep the audience wanting more. You're writing technique is spot on, I love it so much. I love Adam as a character too! So alluring but assertive :D

I seriously love how well you keep the audience wanting more. You're writing technique is spot on, I love it so much. I love Adam as a character too! So alluring but assertive :D