Right now, I'm really hoping that you're writing a sequel. I love this story. It's like I KNOW who Melodie is, and how her expressions are formed. How she acts. It's weird, I know, she's not even real. But I can imagine her more as the girl in the background then Emily Browning. Heh.
Update soon! And good luck with school, I started today.
41?! THAT'S IT?! This story deserves so much more than that! I would comment 9 times, but I don't think that would be very polite (:
BUT I DO COME BEARING GOOD NEWS! 1. Chapter 20 was BRILLIANT! I loved how it showed Joe's POV. HE LOVES HER! YAYYAYYAY!!!!!! (: 2. Chapter 21 was BRILLIANT as well. It showed Melodies POV. NO! She can't have bulemia! Oh well. It's for the story :D 3. Your writing is getting better Christine. It really is (: 4. And I'll have you know I could barely concentrate in school today because I kept thinking about how amazing this story is :)
Hey 50 chapter .. that would be awesome, long and lots of more to come. :) I'll be sure to read all 50 of them and guess what i already read 21 of them lol keep up i cant wait :) Question 50 chapters and sequel or no sequel???