The D in Apartment 23 - Comments

  • powerofkisses

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    Ooooooo what if he didn't do it
    March 14th, 2017 at 05:29am
  • tennisPRO

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    You can't update, update, update, and then leave us with a cliffhanger!! I need moreeeeeee
    March 1st, 2017 at 06:25am
  • sn0tgirl

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    I LOOOOVE this story!! Mr. Green
    September 9th, 2016 at 06:40pm
  • helena_88

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    I really really really enjoy this story Cute
    Bucky and Harry are so cute!! tehe
    Oooh I wonder if they'll find the guys who attacked her though? If they're found........ Hell will break loose tehe
    August 24th, 2016 at 07:12pm
  • Albluerose

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    So far so good, you may have ever want to change out 'was' for 'were'. Other then that great. "Did want to stop you from What you were doing" sounds alot better the. "What you was doing."
    June 28th, 2016 at 12:30am