Fake It 'Til You Make It - Comments

SporkDude (100)

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Please update!! This is really good and it's the kind of fanfiction that makes my stomach do flips! I love this fic so much, I really hope you're able to find time for it in your busy life!

February 7th, 2017 at 12:18pm

jules391 (100)

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OMG this is so sweet

September 30th, 2016 at 07:08am

Isabellevonhuethen (100)

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Loving the idea behind the story, pretend girl/boyfriend always calls for a lot of funny scenes and misunderstandings, can't wait how this plays out.

September 28th, 2016 at 11:30am

Dreamuser (100)

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I just have one thing to say: AWWWWWWWW <3

September 27th, 2016 at 04:23pm

Jalex95 (100)

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I love this! It's so freaking cute!!

September 27th, 2016 at 06:31am

OverbearingStruggles (100)

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This is great! The dishes scene is FREAKING ADORABLE and so perfectly displays their natural flirtatious nature.

September 27th, 2016 at 05:28am

sn4pbackwhore (100)

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@ OverbearingStruggles
Thank you so much for the feedback, that's really helpful for me! I appreciate that, a lot!

I promise I am working on a new chapter right now and I want it to be up tonight or tomorrow!

September 26th, 2016 at 05:48pm

OverbearingStruggles (100)

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Looove this concept! Not enough pretend boyfriend fics in the Jalex world.
I like that part of Alex's convincing is things they've already done before but Jack shrugs them off. LOL boy.
I did feel like you use the word "male" a lot. Maybe try switching that up with boy, the character's name, or just "him." Just a suggestion!
Super excited to see this continue!

September 25th, 2016 at 10:45pm