The Adventures of Rin and Aya - Comments

i really like this story i was can't wait to figure out who the chosen one is i also can't wait to figure out who aya falls in love with. She is one of my fav. characters so is rin i have already guessed that rin falls in love with sin. just a guess but i hope they do they would make a cute couple in my opion. love this story can't wait until the next chapter comes out.

I'm really hoping that you're able to get back to writing this; I'm a big fan and my boyfriend was quite enjoying me reading your humorous parts aloud to him. He says with your writing and my reading, we would make an unbeatable story-telling team, lol.

In any case, good luck with your computer and I hope to see more updates soon. :)

I loved the chapter...but hated the ending. Update soon!

*jumping up and down looking like a complete iditot but i dont care* You posted you posted you posted U rock!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOHHHHH moving vegetation AMAZING that is like my favorite dream i had it after watching lord of the rings two and the trees in my yard started moving and talking and became my buddys!!

That was the longest comment on a story ever!
I am now legendary! Mwahaha!

I checked everyday too, and when I looked today...you had! I was so excited! And I wasn't disappointed. The flash back was so hilarious! I laughed through the whole thing. My mom and Kylie(did mean to spell it that way) think I am now insane, but it was worth it. And my favorite part you ask? No you didn't, but I will tell you anyways!

“And now I shall disappear without a trace. As silent as the night!” He made to jump out of the window but his foot got caught on the string of what looked like Christmas lights and he crashed down onto the roof of the house.

He somersaulted four times, each time making a loud banging sound whenever he hit the roof, and he quickly tried to grab onto the rain gutter, but it gave way with a horrendously loud, sharp sound and he was sent tumbling the ground. A small groan of pain escaped his mouth as he stood up and hobbled away from the house before someone saw him.

So funny!

I like sin he is my favriotist!!!!! Yah you updated i have checked everyday to see if you had updated and you finally did

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Actual comments would be nice. If you have nothing to say then you don't NEED to comment.

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k now my nose hurts i was drinking my sprite threw a straw and i laughed so hard when sin got his little makeunder that it came out of my nose and i gagged myself on my straw.

BLAHHAHAHAHAH-oh a new word fun!

heheheeheheheeh i like raf's interigation!

awesome! i wonder who the choosen one is.....hahaha they had to go to school!=)

First one on page two! Sweet!

I think you did a great job at the end. I could really see you in it. Don't quit now!

please keep it i love this story!

NOOOOOOOOO i love this story!!!! yah the romance mushy stuff is a little well boring but the rest is way cool!

I wasn't bored either! I learned a lot in this chapter. I like chapters like that.
Update soon!

i wasnt bored i likes the pendants. ohhhh shiny objects!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why do you blame me?:

*falls asleep some time around the middle of the legend* Just kidding i would have wlked over to the black hole and fell in it for fun. nice calm..*cough* bor*cough chapeter. please update...i liked the legend though...sorry for being so mean on the ubove part.....tired? i guess...

I understand perfectly what your talking about but not everything can be BANG CRASH BOOM! Yes I admit that last chapter was a little on the boring side but everyone needs to take the bad with the good, and if I had just left that part out no one would have any idea what the heck was going on with the story. So sorry for the inconvenience and I hope next chapter doesn't bore you as well.