The Adventures of Rin and Aya - Comments

*falls asleep some time around the middle of the legend* Just kidding i would have wlked over to the black hole and fell in it for fun. nice calm..*cough* bor*cough chapeter. please update...i liked the legend though...sorry for being so mean on the ubove part.....tired? i guess...

I am very glad that you didn't give us a cliff hanger. I am grateful.

The first part of the story made me laugh a lot. It was really funny! The second part of it was a little more serious, but it was still kind of funny at the same time.

Thank you everyone for all of the comments! I really appreciate it and it helps so much when I'm writing a new chapter. ^_^ THANK YOU again!

For my lack of comments on this I will write one every update!

Okay, I have to say this is the funniest story I have ever read! I can really see your personality in the three main characters. All the stuff they say remind me of so much! Update soon!

Awesome update verrry funny! i'm not good at cookig either who needs to anyeway we have frozen dinner and premade stuff now lol update soon me loves it!!

Hehehe i make deadly cupcakes to

Micha *excuse my spelling but it is late and i dont feel like looking up the correct spelling* is very impatient and not overly romantic hahahhaheheh deadly cupcakes

Kidnap? wow i useally just tell my sister to go away...=) good luck and Update i love this story!

Why does your sister kidnap you so much?

HEHEHEH the deadly tampons!

YA its really hot in florida right now!! lol they sound like my brothers it would be tipical of them to be snoopy and play pranks then freak out about tampons when they find we (my sisters) have retalyated. very good by the way love it! what will happen next! can't wait and god what will the parents think?

Love it! lol i always say that...anyways! more more more! please....*says only because sister pokes her and demands that she be nice and polite* Micah is one of my Favorite names! *smiles evilly! when thinking of laural hamilton's anita blake books* I love to read by the way and ill alway suport people that right good storys...*hint: thats you*

*pouting like a little child and grumbling obsenitys under my breath* YOU JUST HAD TO MAKE IT A CLIFF HANGER

hehehe Ra'Shari and Jonan in the the story nice personal touch and i am guessing Ra'Shari was letting the chickens free so they wouldnt be butchered and eaten.

^_^ Glad you thought it was still funny.

And why does it say that I have two comments instead of one?!

BEN DOVER i love it is even funnier then it was at lunch !!!