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  • everdeen

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    Love your writing and John's timing.
    June 21st, 2017 at 03:48am
  • LoveAsAlways

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    I enjoyed this update very much, I like your portrayal of John! Very Happy
    June 20th, 2017 at 11:11pm
  • lo_lla

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    I'm seriously loving this!! I'm excited to see where it'll go!

    Thanks for sharing your story!
    June 20th, 2017 at 11:09pm
  • everdeen

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    Why I feel Scott is going to reject her or try to get into her pants quickly?
    June 17th, 2017 at 05:06pm
  • lovelyhope

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    Ahhh I can't wait to see how the conversation with Scott goes. Maybe her extra drink will give her extra confidence ;) haha
    June 14th, 2017 at 02:25am
  • LoveAsAlways

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    This is quite interesting and I like your style of writing! More please!
    June 13th, 2017 at 06:45am
  • everdeen

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    I love how she isn't naive (like a bunch of stories out there), she is just afraid of speaking her mind. Can't wait for their mission to begin!
    June 12th, 2017 at 06:05am
  • oskea2015

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    This story just gets better and better! Keep up the awesome work!!!
    June 12th, 2017 at 03:50am
  • lovelyhope

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    I'm really enjoying this story so far and can't wait to see where it goes/ find out more about Georgia and Scott's past!
    June 12th, 2017 at 02:11am
  • everdeen

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    Ooooh God I love it!
    June 6th, 2017 at 11:48pm
  • Ghoul Scouts

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    The layout is so pretty and clean looking. I love it.

    The prologue was really great. I loved how it described how the main character is as a person.
    I realised that the people who don’t play by the rules are the ones who end up getting somewhere.

    That sentence was really powerful to me. I know there were times in my life where I felt like this. So Overall I connected well with the prologue. The first chapter was written perfectly. You did such a wonderful job describing such little details that pulled everything together. I am really excited to see where you take this.
    May 30th, 2017 at 12:20am
  • arrivals.

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    Hi lovelies! Just wanted to let you know that I am going to continue this story, ok? Sorry for taking ages to upload! But it's coming <3
    February 6th, 2017 at 11:07pm
  • tessie

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    more plz! Very Happy
    January 29th, 2017 at 11:53pm
  • iwannamarryjohnterry

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    like the beginning! subscribing to follow the story Smile
    December 11th, 2016 at 05:54pm
  • lovelyhope

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    Really excited to see what's in store for this and find out all the connections between Georgie, Scott, Margie and everyone else!
    December 3rd, 2016 at 02:32am
  • oskea2015

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    Great, great, great!
    November 18th, 2016 at 09:05pm
  • oskea2015

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    So far so good! Can't wait for more :)
    November 17th, 2016 at 01:25am