I wasn't prepared for John to be full of so much tension! Or, maybe I just wasn't expecting him to be so painfully aware of it. I can't wait for the next one!
Dang it freaking dang it! You stirrred my emotions. Like, this poor girl has loved this guy for such a long time, I can relate to that, and now he's finally starting to show some feelings but now there's someone else too. If I were her, I'd feel so conflicted! But being the writer that I am, I can't help but feel there's more things wrong with Scott than what meets the eye, these failed relationships signal something off in my brain, but who knows what you have planned. Can't wait until the next, is John attending the wedding too?
I want to say I can't, but I can. I love how she stays silent while Scott talks, because you can't always say something about moments like that. I alsooooo loved drunk John showing up and I wonder what's brewing in his mind. Can't wait for the next!!!
!!!!!!! I'm all for the 'friend that turns lover' romannce, but I absolutely love her with John, even though he might be more complicated than Scott. She would be good for John, and him for her. I think that with Scott, she would never have a voice of her own. She wouldn't even try to be her own person because she feels that Scott is something more than he is. With John, however, she is stronger. Willing to take more risks to make herself happy instead of everyone else.
A CLIFF HANGER?! How could you do this to me ?!!! Ugh. Well, the chapter was perfect, kinda comic that now that Scott is pretty available, she can't stop thinking about John. UPDATE SOON!!!
Hurray for Tuesday's and Friday's!!! May they come fast!!! Goodness wait til she finds out who John is! Wait til John finds out how he's truly feeling!!!
hi lovelies! just wanted to let you know that from here onwards, i'll be posting twice a week! every tuesday and friday you can expect an update. thank you so much for your constant feedback and support! each and every one of your comments make my day. thank you for loving this story as much as i do!
OH MY EFFING GOD, THIS WAS SO PERFECT!!!!!!! I don't know what came over her, but I love the attitude she had through this whole chapter, and the fact that he FOLLOWED HER AND REPEATED WHAT SHE SAID IN A WAY THAT WAS TRUE FOR HIM!!!! Dude. DUDE. I just can't right now, and I don't think I can wait another week for an update, but I'll try. As much as she thinks she loves Scott, John is absolutely perfect for her. Update soon!
Goodness, I envy your writing dang it! Like, I saw myself there, on the sand, at night time, I saw them both and their movements! So good, can't wait until the next update!