The layout is so pretty and clean looking. I love it.
The prologue was really great. I loved how it described how the main character is as a person. I realised that the people who don’t play by the rules are the ones who end up getting somewhere.
That sentence was really powerful to me. I know there were times in my life where I felt like this. So Overall I connected well with the prologue. The first chapter was written perfectly. You did such a wonderful job describing such little details that pulled everything together. I am really excited to see where you take this.