@ Skull_Kid_Majora Thank you for the nice comment! Seriously it means a lot :D I'm still new at writing and stuff so you're for sure going to see some mistakes.
I really like this story so far! The characters are very believable, it moves at a good pace, and the plot is intriguing. There are some minor grammatical errors, but it doesn't detract from the story at all. Please continue! =)
Thank you for the nice comment! Seriously it means a lot :D I'm still new at writing and stuff so you're for sure going to see some mistakes.