The Sun Only Lasts If We Live - Comments

@ Michael Westen

I know and the memory stays forever, apparently, as my brother still has the scars! From time to time, he still itches them, like it has come back.

That's crazy. I didn't even know you could get chickenpox on your tongue!

@ thequeensterrace
Thanks for reading!

@ Michael Westen
My brother had chickenpox that was really serious, and most of the spots were on his tongue. Fortunately, unlike Sunonemun, he didn't have to have his tongue cut out, but (and this is slightly scary) they were talking about doing it if it got any worse. That's where I got that idea.

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How did the chickenpox affect the tongue? I've never heard of that before. This is getting so intense.

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I'm glad we're meeting Kato.
Again, so intense.

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This is so sad. You can just feel the pain that this character is in.

Overall this was really interesting. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it.

This is really interesting. And I'm annoyed for Sun as there isn't even an m at the end of his(?) name.

There isn't a lot of description but that's fine. The description and dialogue you do have though serve a good balance.