The Heart of the Night - Comments

  • Michael Westen

    Michael Westen (450)

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    This is a really good introduction. It's intriguing.

    On one hand you have Dylan who is apparently oblivious to his wife's feelings. And then you have Mandy who is obviously who definitely needs something different in her life, which I'm guessing their server is going to take part in.

    I like the little detail about Dylan still taking forever to order even after frequenting for so long, it's very relatable to actual life.

    It'll definitely be interesting to see where this goes.
    February 15th, 2017 at 08:45pm
  • Brittt

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    oooh I'm excited for the next chapter already. Can't wait to see where you take this.
    February 15th, 2017 at 07:55pm