Fruit of Another - Comments

@ TheQueensofHiatus
Oh my gosh, thank you so much!

You are such a gifted writer, omg. I can literally feel the anxiety and anticipation as the characters are going through what they go through. Another excellent chapter! can't wait for the next update!

@ AliMeansWings
I can't wait!

@ TheQueensofHiatus
It only gets crazier.

my jaw was to the floor as I read this! so much happening in one chapter! Poor Isabella :(

the update was AMAZING. Isabella is such a quick thinker!

I just binge-read all these chapters and the cliffhanger on chapter 12 has me at the edge of my seat! please update soon! can't wait to read more

Excellent cliffhanger on chapter 12! Keep up the great work

@ AliMeansWings
Anytime! I really like your style.

@ Justified Sundays
Thank you SO much!!

This story is a work of art, right here. I'm impressed by everything. The character detail, the emotions, the plot. I'm definitely all for Devin's sexual appetite, because in my stories I look for the animalistic primitive side, but I'll root for Mitchell, because he's got a better heart.

And you set a killer sex scene.

Double post, whoops.

Good on the aunt for picking up what's going on between Isabella and Mitchell. I wonder what the plan is bringing Isabella along to this finance dinner. Quite surprised Devin is letting her go when he suspects something is amiss. Still waiting for Mitchell to grow some balls. Like when Devin called him out of the kitchen, I was like dude you don't have to listen to him, you're a grown ass man LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It was interesting to see a slightly softer side of Devin. And the fact that he said he wants to be better for her was a good sign, though I feel like this is the calm before the storm. Definitely didn't expect to see Anthony asking for Mitchell's help, but I suspect they'll make one hell of a team. They both know that Devin's hurting Isabella and both of them also care about her a lot, so now they both need to grow a pair and do something about it. I'm kinda looking forward to seeing someone stand up to Devin. With a face as pretty as his, he can't really be all that intimidating. Eager for the next update!! Gotta find out what happens at this Sunday dinner!!

Love the story! Team Mitchell all the way!

@ thor is bae
Something told me you'd be Team Mitchell.

Don't know which way this story's gonna go now. Devin definitely knows something is up and I just wonder if he'll be able to put two and two together. Even though Isabella loves him, I get the sense that she's kinda tired of his ways. And now that she got a taste of how nice things could be with Mitchell, she's really gonna start to want that for herself. Poor Mitchell just wants to whisk her away and give her the sweet life and I'm totally rooting for him to do just that. TEAM MITCHELL ALL THE WAY!!!

And there you have it, the dirty deed is done!! I feel like Devin already knows ha-ha, like he has a sixth sense about stuff like that. Isabella is a little temptress for sure, but I ain't even mad at her. She got some of that hot and sweet British lovin'. Mitchell would definitely be a good guy for her, but if he really wants her he's gonna have to toughen up because Devin's not letting her go without a fight. Thanks for the shout out! Excited to see what happens next!

@ thor is bae
I'm so excited for them and I'm the one that made them up!

Ahhh! The sexual tension is at an all-time high!! When they finally kiss, they're probably both going to explode!!! More soon!!