Fruit of Another - Comments

If Mitchell doesn't make a move on her soon, he's going to miss his chance!

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Devin expected a lot from his wife.

Well, that's the understatement of the year. God bless Isabella, she must really love that man. He's demanding and controlling to the extreme. It's too bad about his mom and even worse that he won't miss her. Secretly, I think he really will. I suspect something is about to happen between Mitchell and Isabella, but I don't know if you're gonna spring it on us this early in the game. A small part of me is hoping that you do
I feel like this is definitely the kind of story where all hell can break loose and I'm super excited to see how it all pans out. More soon!!!

@ thor is bae
Thank you, love! I love the idea of Staten Island because my mom's favorite cousin lived there. Also, Theo Rossi. He may be making an appearance later.

Wow, what a whirlwind first chapter! You obviously don't wanna mess with Devin. Love how you gave a bit of background on each character. And also I think it's HUGE that you're writing about the forgotten borough Staten Island because I grew up there!!!!! It's so crazy because SI is this small, rarely mentioned place and I'm pretty sure I've never seen it used as a story setting before, but it's so cool that you're using it. I actually lived close to the Stapleton area too at one point. I'm gonna hold this story kinda close to my heart now LOL.

Anywho, Devin and Isabella's relationship seems interesting and I can't wait to see more. Poor Mitch, though. Being in love with your best friend's wife has definitely gotta suck. This is off to a fantastic start!!! I'm already looking forward to more!!

@ thor is bae
I'm working on it as we speak! I was *this* close to messaging you to ask how to do the .gifs, but I figured it out. Lol!

I am totally for this!!!!! *sits and waits patiently for story to begin*