WHY??? You're making me like Brian and you know I don't like to like him. He's being so sweet kind and actually thinking with the proper head. I hate admitting this but I'm liking this side of him. So feed me more when you get the chance. <3
As always you draw me in. Sorry I'm late in commenting, my nanny died and I haven't gotten a chance until now because things have been hectic. But I patiently wait for what you bring for us next. Oh and Chapter 3 didn't suck, you're telling a story and that chapter was part of the story.
I love this story ! Freaking bastard cheated on her ... that sucks! I can feel that it's gonna be a real pain waiting for you to update, ahah. So far, so good! I can't wait to read more! :) xo
I love this so far. I usually don't read anything that isn't finished, because I hate waiting lol, but this one caught my eye and I already love this so much.
I love how you're not rushing things, but at the same time, it's not dragging either.
Please keep going. I like the build up you've got going here. Need to know more. I also need a friend to take me for a spa and shopping day on their tab too. <3
I'm hooked already. I like the fact that it's different from most plot lines these days and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. And Matt having a twin!!! Love this idea.
I also like that you're doing third person. You're doing a great job so far, and I'll be your biggest advocate if you need me to be because I'm excited for more.
And isn't it kinda great when you get inspiration like that? When it hits me like that sometimes it's hard for me to stop writing and then I end up a zombie from writing overload. I love that part of writing though. Anyway, more when you can please and mad love to you babe <3