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  • amandarenee08

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    I so did not see the ending coming. I loved it. I hate that Sacorra lost her momma, and Zacky lost Jayde. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the sequel :)
    July 10th, 2018 at 03:54pm
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Thank you both so much for all your love on this! I'm sorry I ended it the way I did, I just couldn't find a way to keep it going. I've got something else in the works I'm not sure when I'll start posting it exactly, but soon hopefully:)
    July 5th, 2018 at 03:16pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update. sad to see Sacorra lost her mum :( I enjoyed reading this story :)
    July 5th, 2018 at 01:33pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Jayde was right not to forgive him. Zack really sucked as a partner. I hope he was a good father... And poor Sacorra, getting left with Zack then losing her mother. Sad I kept hoping for a happy ending somehow, but it never came. Loved this story, though!
    July 3rd, 2018 at 12:39am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Getting stuck with Zee? No bueno. Jason shouldn't have let that happen, no matter what.
    And Zack is dense. Lol. How could he not have known it was her?!
    Ohhhh shit. Well, that's one way to find out....
    June 17th, 2018 at 02:22am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    June 16th, 2018 at 12:52am
  • amandarenee08

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    Loved it
    June 14th, 2018 at 02:45am
  • Deathbat_Harlot6661

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    Loved the update. Can't wait for more
    June 13th, 2018 at 09:33pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update! Curious about who Jason's girlfriend is. Cant wait for more
    May 20th, 2018 at 12:38am
  • Breepocket

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    Damn. He definitely deserved the throat punch.hard. But daaaamn
    May 19th, 2018 at 02:45pm
  • shortygirl

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    He deserved that throat punch. Is Jason's girlfriend Jayde?
    May 19th, 2018 at 07:59am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Facepalm Oh, Zack. You're an idiot. There's no way to justify this one. I hope Jayde punches you in the throat.
    May 18th, 2018 at 12:48am
  • amandarenee08

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    loved it
    May 18th, 2018 at 12:35am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Really Zack! I have a feeling Jayde will find out about that soon.... Loved the update
    May 17th, 2018 at 10:58pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I gotta be honest...Jayde is coming across as a little paranoid. However, she does know Zack quite well, so maybe she has reason to be worried about Meghan. I hope the trip helps and when they come back, they're happily engaged!
    May 9th, 2018 at 06:10am
  • Breepocket

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    8 oh snap. Hopefully the cabin will help them
    May 8th, 2018 at 04:54pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update. I hope the cabin helps them
    May 8th, 2018 at 11:53am
  • amandarenee08

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    Amazing update! I really can't wait to see more <3
    May 8th, 2018 at 03:03am
  • deathbatXcookie

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    @ synful vengeance.

    Thank you ! <3
    April 29th, 2018 at 11:32pm
  • the rev;

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    Okay so I just read this. I really love this story! I really can't wait to see more! <3
    April 29th, 2018 at 09:31pm