I so did not see the ending coming. I loved it. I hate that Sacorra lost her momma, and Zacky lost Jayde. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the sequel :)
Thank you both so much for all your love on this! I'm sorry I ended it the way I did, I just couldn't find a way to keep it going. I've got something else in the works I'm not sure when I'll start posting it exactly, but soon hopefully:)
Jayde was right not to forgive him. Zack really sucked as a partner. I hope he was a good father... And poor Sacorra, getting left with Zack then losing her mother. I kept hoping for a happy ending somehow, but it never came. Loved this story, though!
Getting stuck with Zee? No bueno. Jason shouldn't have let that happen, no matter what. And Zack is dense. Lol. How could he not have known it was her?! Ohhhh shit. Well, that's one way to find out....
I gotta be honest...Jayde is coming across as a little paranoid. However, she does know Zack quite well, so maybe she has reason to be worried about Meghan. I hope the trip helps and when they come back, they're happily engaged!