Tattered Sails on My Horizon - Comments

loved the update. I understand where Matt's coming from but I think the two of them will be perfectly fine together XD

They have been caught! It was only a matter of time. Can't wait for more

I so love this chapter cant wait till the next ond

@ SynysterVengeance13
That chapter has been written since about Chapter 3/4 so I've known for a while when/how they would be busted and it's been torture keeping it to myself as you all were talking about them getting caught

@ breepocket
I can imagine I'd have a hard time to keep that to myself XD

@ SynysterVengeance13
Thank you! It's been killing me to keep this one to myself

Oh my god! the best way to get busted! I can't wait to see how they explain it to them all XD Loved the update

@ mdcustard
I had this written for a while and everyone's been dying to see them busted. It's been hard not to let the cat out of the bag

Busted!! I wonder if this will set them back now everyone knows or whether they will be comfortable with things out in the open?

Hot hot hot!!! They can’t keep their hands off each other. It’s only a matter of time before someone catches them

Loved the update! They’re so perfect for each other I can’t wait to see what happens between them in the future!

They already liked being around each other. Of course sex is going to make it even more urgent and addictive! Owen is ahead of Brian, having at least admitted she "likes" him. Wonder how long it will take them to be honest -- or hide in denial and potentially screw up everything.

They are both addicted to each other and forming a strong relationship even if they both seem to be in denile. Will they get spotted out for a romantic dinner?

I like how they're both starting to want to be with each other every chance they get. Loved the update :)

Of course this is hitting her hard! Cooper might be a douche noodle, but Owen did love him. The guys had her best interests at heart, and Brian shouldn't feel bad about encouraging that. He did the right thing in realizing when she'd had enough. And Zack...well, he got what was coming to him. Lol. He knew better.

Loved the update. I wish someone would call them out soon I would love to see how Owen and Brian handle that

Poor zacky getting picked on! Can’t believe the rest of them still aren’t noticing

Loved the update! I can't wait to see how Val reacts to finding out that there is actually something going on between them :D I'm sure the guys will soon notice too!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I've still got a fair amount of chapters prewritten, and I happen to think the events get fairly interesting.

Mr. Sanders is the best. And of course Val noticed that Brian and Owen have changed; girls notice stuff like that. But if they aren't careful, everyone else will pick up on it. They're clearly more cuddly than they used to be...