Tattered Sails on My Horizon - Comments

  • helena_88

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    So I really really enjoy those two first chapters, it's started off really good Very Happy
    ya know if I were in her shoes i'd have my 4 older brothers pay Cooper a visit tehe
    March 20th, 2018 at 12:59pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Damn! That is one big secret! I'm surprised she didn't murder Cooper on the spot when she found out!

    Brian really is the sweetest. It's good she has a shoulder to lean -- and cry -- on, as well as a place to stay.
    March 20th, 2018 at 08:20am
  • mdcustard

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    Wow! Cooper is a total asswipe. Deserves not only a divorce but his world falling away like he’s done to her. Glad she’s got Brian to turn to
    March 20th, 2018 at 08:09am
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    @ SynysterVengeance13
    Thank you! I'm kinda attached to the relationship I've built for them
    March 20th, 2018 at 02:42am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I really feel for Owen! That’s the worst thing that could happen. How could cooper do that for three years! Ugh! I’m so glad she’s moving on with Brian they really are the best of friends and are so perfect for each other :D loved the update!
    March 20th, 2018 at 02:24am
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    March 19th, 2018 at 01:33am
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    Loving this so far! I love Brian and Owen’s friendship!
    March 19th, 2018 at 01:31am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ breepocket

    You're welcome!

    Awe! *blush* Thank you!
    March 18th, 2018 at 03:27am
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Thank you!!! That means so much coming from you!! I'm pretty much obsessed with your stories so I'm glad you're enjoying the start to this one!
    March 18th, 2018 at 02:31am
  • mdcustard

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    Interesting start - why are they getting a divorce? And Brian being a gentlemen with his best friend
    March 17th, 2018 at 09:02pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I'm already interested. I love the way you've described the characters, giving a glimpse into the relationships by their actions rather than just words. Brian's so cute, worried about his BFF. And I like Owen already. Her point about swearing is spot on.

    Can't wait for more! I do hope you stay motivated, because I'd like to see how this goes Mr. Green
    March 17th, 2018 at 05:38am