Strike A Pose - Comments

Wow, was I wrong.

>.>

I guess there's no harm in reviving the comment board for my own story?

It's going to have to get used again eventually, right?

<-- sits and waits for an update.

Ahhh...It's entertaining if you're bored, but I think I'm going to stop whatching iotnonce Clark, or superman or whatever you want to call him gets together with Lana... but I have a feeling something is going to happen with Cloe...
Oh, I'm so pissed. I just spent a hour or two on the next chappie of one of my stories, and it was goiung amazingly, and my comp freaked out, and went to mu layouts page, and erased all the stuff I had written... I want to cry almost.

Ahaha, no, I like the attention :b

And agreed, Smallville sucks major ween.

When I saw that they were making a movie, I literally laughed at my TV.

YES!!
I've been really bored today...and I'm only into a few stories on this site, so I'm pretty much just sitting staring at my computer going.
Update...you know you want to...."
only not that creepy...
I went up to my room and watched a few episodes of the first season of Smallville, which isn't that great...at all.
Anyway.
Sorry I've practically been using the story comments like the message board...
but it does have to do with the story and stuff, so I guess it still counts as a "comment" or whatever. I just feel like a (badword) for doing that, because I don't want to get peoples hopes up
I know I'd be kinda pissed if I looked at my thing and it said that I had a billion new story comments, and then I found out it was just someone rambling on like I am now.
which means I should prolly stop, huh?
so yeah...
:)

Haha, no worries.

MORE COMMENTS FOR ME EITHER WAY!

Bwahaha.

Oh, by the way, update should stroll around later tonight, be prepared.

;]

It's just now that I realize how stupid that last thing made my story seem.
"Such cruelty to a poor new servant boy your highness"?
ugh...
It's not that dumb I swear...the kid saying it is like super cocky, and the main chacter was just like "I hate you."
so yeah...
just had to get that out.
:]

I threw in a little mix of directing phrases.

I don't think it's that awful.

Yeah...I can see that, but then you can still get people to understand who's talking without actually saing "Blah," He said
kinda like this.
"Oh, wow. Such cruelness to a poor new servant boy your highness." Here he sweeped his hand out and bowed with a flouish in front of me.

That's the last sentance in a chapter in one of my stories.

Haha, well I dunno. I try to switch things up a bit, but I'm just not a huge fan of...

"Blah," he said.

She replied, "Blah."

I think it gets really boring, really fast. And then there's all that comma junk I don't feel like dealing with. I dunno. I like to keep it simple. And with first person...I dunno, I'm just not good at it. I get bored too fast when I read it, cause I'm just like..."Okay [insert character name here], good for you..."

I'm weird like that :b

I find it harder to do second personwriting, because...I like to think of my characters as myself...so I always treat situations with my charaster the way I would...I simply pretend I am the character, and then tell everyone what's going on....
I 've always not liked 2nd person much cuz it's all like "He did this he did that, then she went to the park" and I'm sitting there going "How the (badword) do you know that? You Creepy!"
ahhhhh... any way...I'm lovin the story...even if it is in second person.
which must mean your really good because I normally don't stick around for second erson storues...anywho...end of my super long comment.

I'm not sure really. I can't handle dialogue or first person writing very well.

I consider myself cursed :b

Okay...I just have one question, and that is
Why do you hate dialouge so much?
It seems like you and I have completely different writing styles...I am a giant fan of dialouge...and I love writing in first person. just a question...any way.

so. your story, is very cute. =]
i love it, and you =]

-subcribes-

I didn't change anything yet...

And it's Marco from Degrasi <333

Well I thought so. But I just checked and I think I might have been wrong. Perhaps I am going crazy.
But, as a revision, nice job on not screwing up any of the capitalizations or spellings. That's rare, and makes it easier to read.
By the way, whose the guy on your icon? He looks annoyingly familiar...

I missed a capitalization?!

-checks obsessively-

So nobody had really commented, and I'm like, WHY?!?! because I would love some updates.
Keep it up Mike, I love this!!
Oh, and remember to capitalize the first letter in dialouge, it was just something I noticed in this last chapter.
b(^.^)d

I'll see what I can do :b