Relative Design - Comments

I don't think Max is needed, especially since he wasn't mentioned any more in the chapter, than the beginning. Dogs don't let you just sit around talking like that without interrupting, especially a puppy in a new home. But besides that it was a great chapter!!!

@ Katemerchant
It wasn't obvious, not technically. Because I thought he went to England to go get his son.....but turns out he found him afterwards. Really great update!!!

@ RFarley1991
You did! Guess I have to go back and edit so it's not super obvious. Lol!

@ Katemerchant
I'm glad I could make your day!!! You're very welcome. And OMG I called it on Eric being his son!!! That's crazy!!

OMG I JUST SAW YOUR SUPER NICE COMMENT!!! That is so, so nice! I literally can’t even convey how much you just made my day! Thank you!!!

As for the big secret... it’s quite possible! I promise the next one is a good one though!

Please tell me we're going to find out the big secret next chapter!!!!! I'm dying to know!!!!!

@ Katemerchant
You are literally amazing at writing!!!
I wish I could write like you!! I get ideas but never follow through with them and when I do I never finish anything so I'm glad there are people, like you, out there that can write their thoughts!!!

@ RFarley1991
You are literally the best! Thank you!!!

For not knowing how to end it, you ended it well :D

@ RFarley1991
Thank you!!!

Omg such an amazing chapter!!!!!

@ RFarley1991
Thank you! I know in the past I've definitely been too reliant on dialogue and I'm making a conscious effort to be better about that so I really appreciate it(:

@ Katemerchant
I feel as long as dialogue isn't the ONLY thing, then it's good. but you have the perfect amount of dialogue and description and other stuff

@ RFarley1991
Thank you!!! I enjoy writing it, but sometimes I feel like I get a little carried away. Lol.

Love love LOVE the update!!! And dialogue is good for a story to move forward!

@ RFarley1991
I'm going to post an update on Monday this week instead of Tuesday so at least it's a shorter wait! I'm almost done with the chapter and I really like it so far!

@ Katemerchant
gah I can't wait!! Wish it was time for the next chapter already!!

@ RFarley1991
Thank you!!! I'm back now and I'm hoping to stick to the schedule! I've got some of the next chapter done and I'M SUPER EXCITED. (Spoiler: Adam is the cutest in this chapter. And grown Eric is a riot.)

I was wondering where you went! Congrats on the new job!!!
I really hope things work out between them!!!

@ Katemerchant
I so can't wait to fins out what the big secret about Eric is!!!!