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    I don't think Max is needed, especially since he wasn't mentioned any more in the chapter, than the beginning. Dogs don't let you just sit around talking like that without interrupting, especially a puppy in a new home. But besides that it was a great chapter!!!
    April 17th, 2019 at 05:21am
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    It wasn't obvious, not technically. Because I thought he went to England to go get his son.....but turns out he found him afterwards. Really great update!!!
    April 10th, 2019 at 11:00am
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    @ RFarley1991
    You did! Guess I have to go back and edit so it's not super obvious. Lol!
    April 9th, 2019 at 07:09pm
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    @ Katemerchant
    I'm glad I could make your day!!! You're very welcome. And OMG I called it on Eric being his son!!! That's crazy!!
    April 3rd, 2019 at 01:39am
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    OMG I JUST SAW YOUR SUPER NICE COMMENT!!! That is so, so nice! I literally can’t even convey how much you just made my day! Thank you!!!

    As for the big secret... it’s quite possible! I promise the next one is a good one though!
    March 29th, 2019 at 08:09pm
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    Please tell me we're going to find out the big secret next chapter!!!!! I'm dying to know!!!!!
    March 29th, 2019 at 06:46pm
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    @ Katemerchant
    You are literally amazing at writing!!!
    I wish I could write like you!! I get ideas but never follow through with them and when I do I never finish anything so I'm glad there are people, like you, out there that can write their thoughts!!!
    March 23rd, 2019 at 04:09am
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    @ RFarley1991
    You are literally the best! Thank you!!! Very Happy
    March 22nd, 2019 at 12:28pm
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    For not knowing how to end it, you ended it well :D
    March 21st, 2019 at 07:14am
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    @ RFarley1991
    Thank you!!! Very Happy
    March 14th, 2019 at 06:26pm
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    Omg such an amazing chapter!!!!!
    March 13th, 2019 at 03:05am
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    @ RFarley1991
    Thank you! I know in the past I've definitely been too reliant on dialogue and I'm making a conscious effort to be better about that so I really appreciate it(:
    February 25th, 2019 at 02:04am
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    @ Katemerchant
    I feel as long as dialogue isn't the ONLY thing, then it's good. but you have the perfect amount of dialogue and description and other stuff
    February 24th, 2019 at 06:36am
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    @ RFarley1991
    Thank you!!! I enjoy writing it, but sometimes I feel like I get a little carried away. Lol.
    February 24th, 2019 at 03:19am
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    Love love LOVE the update!!! And dialogue is good for a story to move forward!
    February 19th, 2019 at 05:56am
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    @ RFarley1991
    I'm going to post an update on Monday this week instead of Tuesday so at least it's a shorter wait! I'm almost done with the chapter and I really like it so far!
    February 17th, 2019 at 02:50am
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    gah I can't wait!! Wish it was time for the next chapter already!!
    February 15th, 2019 at 08:00am
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    @ RFarley1991
    Thank you!!! I'm back now and I'm hoping to stick to the schedule! I've got some of the next chapter done and I'M SUPER EXCITED. (Spoiler: Adam is the cutest in this chapter. And grown Eric is a riot.)
    February 15th, 2019 at 12:59am
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    I was wondering where you went! Congrats on the new job!!!
    I really hope things work out between them!!!
    February 13th, 2019 at 12:30pm
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    I so can't wait to fins out what the big secret about Eric is!!!!
    February 1st, 2019 at 07:05am
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