I'm really enjoying this so far! The characters you've created are really interesting. I can't wait to learn more about these mysterious Novak brothers. Excited for the next update.
Couple things though, some words have typos or are the wrong words entirely. For example when you wrote that he grabbed her when she brought him home you put he crap her. Lol but it's really really good so far!
Thank you so much. Update is coming as fast as I can write it :)