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@ Damsel of Darkness

I think he has glasses on in his new video for "Small World." But my point of reference was this:

Ooh! Djing fun! Although it's also work.. on her day off... but at least it's fun work. Haha.

I like that she thought to check with Tim, since Rob is right, it would be respectful.

Oh, glasses on a man is so attractive. And Zacky in glasses... phew! I imagine Tim would be just adorable too!

She got caught staring! Poor thing, that's so embarrassing. But I'm glad she was able to quickly shrug it off and get down to the task at hand. Haha.

Nawww... she wants him there and he wants to be there! My god, these two are cute. I love that normally, she seems quite confidant and carries herself well, but around him her nerves seem to get the best of her. She's cute when she's flustered. Hahaha.

Evie and Poppy shared a glance. "Should we find somewhere else to entertain ourselves?" Evie inquired. - Psst... yes! Leave them alone in a dark DJ booth... sounds like a great idea!

Helena kept sneaking peeks at him. It was nice to see him so relaxed and enjoying himself. She was barely aware of the smile that wouldn't leave her lips. - Literally awwed out loud at that! So damn cute!!!

Argh, I'm so hooked it's ridiculous. Love it!

Just caught up and I love how sweet Tim is and how sneaky sultry Nero is. Can't wait for more.

I love how sweet he is with her. But it would give them something to do and it’s great that he gave her the option to agree or deny the invite instead of telling her no. Hahahahaha bad horror movies are always a girls night must. Loved it!

Urgh, they need to bang already!! :P
I mean, Tim can't just be all sexy like that wearing glasses, speaking Swedish. That is just not polite to your drummer!! :P
But I am so glad he agreed to go with Helena to DJ! And so proud of Helena for asking! You go, Hels!!!
Hahahaha, Evie... "Should we find somewhere else to entertain ourselves?"
Hahahahahahahha

I am super keen to see how the music and the atmosphere of the club gets to them both ;)

I looooove that they went to sing karaoke after hearing it. Lmao brace girl letting Evie pick but I would have been like her and taken anything away that could be used to record her lol. Yeeeeees breaking legs if they ruin it. Loved it!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I love this!!!!! From Evies scheming (she is totally up to something) to the pure tension between Hels and the boys!!!!

Bonus points for the Halestorm song (you are amazing)!

Urgh, could Tim be any more tempting?! Seriously boy, calm down or make a move otherwise your drummer might not make it through the tour!! :P

@ Damsel of Darkness

Söt en translates to "sweet one" or "pretty one"

The descriptive way you portrayed the girls day and walk on the beach at dusk is amazing. I can practically taste the salt in the air! I don't even like summer, as you know, but I wish it was right now! I wanna go to the beach. Hahaha.

"Sure he will!" Evie said. "Just let him know his drummer, guitar tech, and merch bitch are about to make utter fools of themselves." - Who could say no to that?! Pretty sure the biggest draw card is the Drummer, though.

Helena and Poppy permitted her to choose their songs, their only stipulation that it not be anything by Britney Spears, Taylor Swift, et cetera. - Oh, please have her pick an A7X song for Helena...

She watched Nero make his way to the table, settling himself on Poppy's vacated chair. The raven-haired man met her gaze. His small smile somehow hinted at both amusement and curiosity. - Mhm... he's a dangerous man. That's all I have to say about him right now.

I don't know the song that was chosen for Helena, but damn... very fitting. Hahaha. Well done, Evie!

The corner of Nero's mouth quirked upward, just a little, and Helena would have sworn he could read her mind. There was something about the way he licked his lips. - DANGEROUS!

"Bass, drums, guitar, and you sing very well. I am interested to know what other talents you are hiding, söt en." - Tim, on the other hand.... btw... what does the last bit mean?!

@ kiss my sas

Thanks, Sas. Now I have "In Another Life" by Sköld stuck in my head

@ Damsel of Darkness
Hahahah you are the best!! In another life!!

Oh, btw, the scenes that had both Evie and Brian in them... made me smile. Oh, in another world... @ kiss my sas

So I woke up ridiculously early for a Sunday, so I laid in bed and caught up on your story! Whilst normally I comment as I read, I just can't do that on my phone (I am far too impatient and hit the wrong letters then I get mad and it's just gibberish) so this comment may be a little disjointed!

First of all, I really like Helena and Matt's sibling bond! So often I read stories with a character related to one of the guys and often the level of closeness is just... creepy. Like, sometimes the affection just strikes me as far too inappropriate for brothers and sisters. But thank god these two are not like that! His protective nature is cute and I like how she seems to secretly like it, since it's always nice have someone care that much about you

Speaking of Matty... I hope Tiffany gets her chance with him! She's got it bad... hahaha

And speaking of having it bad! Brian + Helena.... okay, so I get this is Tim Skold fic, but I just can't help myself and I wish for Helena and Brian pairing. They are so cute and he seems quite interested! So does she... whether she wants to admit it or not. Easy to ignore when they're not actually around each other, but it's so there...

Tim and Nero are an interesting pair. I do like her dynamic with Tim; the cute little names he calls her are just adorable. But damn, he's 52?! Holy shit! That just kind of blows my mind. Hahaha. Their interactions are cute... I like that one minute she mostly feels fine with him, then the next she's all flustered. And when he bluntly asked her about why she didn't hook up with that Ryan guy... jeez! Poor girl! Hahaha.

Back to Tim and Nero. They also have a very interesting dynamic. I like the challenging and almost passive aggressive sort of attitude between them. The part where Nero basically tried to make a move on her and then he shared a challenging look with Tim was very telling. It seems they have some undisclosed issues, for sure...

Oh! And her encounter with Till... PHEW! I mean, of all the men around her, he seemed like the safest option to blow off steam. Especially since it was a passing encounter. Well, I assume as much... although I literally laughed out loud at Brian's comments and bewilderment at how she wasn't torn apart by him. Hilarious!

I am very intrigued by the mysterious nature of Tim and Nero and I look forward to learning more about them. Especially the way he was so in tuned with Helena in the last chapter... the feeling of her feelings... mmm.. interesting! Can't wait to see where it goes!

Loved it!

Oh I loved it. I loved her and him listening to the music she loves and how he did t press her to talk about Jimmy when she asked him not to. Those cutie names <3. Can’t wait for more!

THE PICTURE?!??!!?!
Oh my Mibba wife, you treat me so well!! :D
Look at those boys, holy shit... I mean, I have no words! Tim's little lip bite? That isn't playing fair!!!

Anyway, the actual chapter...
I loved having the little insights from Tim, the things he picks up (including her pulse racing at the sight of Brian!). and then the end?! The new nickname?! ADORABLE!!!!!

More?! :D

Hahahahaha oh my lord Brian going there had me cracking up. Well of course Matt is going to worry but it’s nothing he hasn’t done himself so he shouldn’t try to be so hard on her. Loved it!

loved it

I mean, ITS FREAKING TILL!!! He doesn't need me to help you write a story, thank you :P
But I ADORED all the girl talk in this! Holy shit, it was perfection!!! I love that even Brian was on Helena's side, which means he isn't scared to see her sexually ;) Always a bonus!!
I freaking LOVE how Evie wasn't giving her an inch of space, demanding to know if her speculations were correct! So good!!!
And EVERYONE wanting to know how she wasn't broken in half - fucking hilarious!!!
This was such a fun chapter, brother-lecture and all!

Loved it