Insatiable - Comments

I just love her relationship with Matt and the other guys. I love how they’re all in each other’s business. They’re like a small town with all that gossip. Loved it!

Haha! Oh Zacky! I love the vibe between her and Brian but I can see this becoming a problem. Also since I forgot to review last chapter, what is going on with creepy Nero! Can't wait for more.

I'm so excited for this update that I'm practically giddy!

"FUCKED ANY MORE OLD DUDES LATELY?" - Oh, Zacky... you dirty boy.

"Mr. Big Mouth strikes again." - He's on a roll! Apparently the boy can't keep a secret to save his life... lets hope he's never told anything of significant sensitivity. Hahaha.

"You took video of us dancing?!" and a loud pop!

"OW!" Brian exclaimed. - Bahahaha! Love it. At least his giant mouth has consequences... I still feel he won't learn. He's lucky he's pretty.

"I love all of you, too," Helena said, feeling the now familiar ache in her chest. - Naww, poor thing. She's having a blast, but it would be hard to be missing her family. She should go get a hug from Tim. Just sayin'

Nawww... the duet via Facetime is adorable. They are so cute. I really love their dynamic, the closeness that they have. It's really nice. Doesn't mean I don't want them to throwdown and get nasty, tho... at least once!

"The eye candy would be tastier with us."

Helena bit her lip. "I don't know..."

Chuckling, Brian shook his head. "I can't believe you have an old guy fetish." - Oh my god... could you imagine a tour with ALL of that eye candy? I know music doesn't really mesh, but who cares? She'd have to spend 90% of her time under a cold shower... or under one of them

Did she just say no to seeing him naked?! Argh, fucking crazy woman!!

Okay, so after the talk of taking matters into her own hands... I tip my hat to her that she's able to let all this sexual tension build around her and not find a way to release it. I mean, the satisfaction Till gave her must have worn off by now. Yes, it might be a little weird with two men on the bus... but still. She's got the strength of a saint

On the edge of my seat for more!

I JUST DIED!!!!
"FUCKED ANY MORE OLD DUDES LATELY?"
HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!!!

But that convo with Matt was the cutest!!!! I mean, they are the best!!! He definitely should know he would get no decent talking time with Hels if the Terror Twins were running around behind him! :P

NAW! HOW CUTE IS THEIR GUITAR DATE?! Could they be any more sweet? Really?! Part of me is now rooting for Hels and Brian! That was fucking ADORABLE!!!

Oh, Brian, behave! It's not an old man fetish. I mean, HAVE YOU SEEN THEM?! *drowns in the sexy*

I do think that they may have to rectify seeing each other naked... I mean, they definitely need to update one another on the changes ;) Heheheheh!

More, please :D

Nero does seem to have this vibe about him. And she may wanna trust her feelings on that. Lmao seems like everyone is getting in on that dance. Uh oh is Tim starting to feel some sort of way for Hels? Loved it!

So both girls have a weird vibe about Nero... hell, so do I! I like that they're talking about it, confiding in each other. Clearly he is a bit mysterious and all... but weird for Evie to have seen a girl appear to be scared. Weird kinks is a possibility, but I don't see that inciting fear... maybe disgust or discomfort. I mean, I suppose it depends on the kink, but still! I think these girls need to put their detective hats on and dig a little deeper into the mystery that is Nero!

Loving the bit more insight into Tim!!

He remembered her giggle and the way her features had brightened with amusement. - NAWWW!!

But she was off-limits, a band mate, a business partner who he had to view as such. - Pfft, no! He can view her as so much more... and he should! Gah!

I agree with Tim; Brian definitely has a thing for Helena. And you know I wanna see those two hook up. But now...I kind of don't. I want her with Tim. There's a serious connection there, one that might be tied to more than just an attraction. But now I'm invested in these two!! More cute moments! More moments like the one at the DJ booth

"My, my, mastare," - well that's a very interesting way to address him!!!

Argh. More! I feel like you just tease us with these chapters... I need more asap! I am not a patient woman!

Also, I agree with Sas, jealous Tim is definitely sexy

Ohhhh, some info coming out about the ever intriguing Nero!! I love hearing Evie's side as she has known him a little longer than Helena, yet they both get the same vibe from him.
Urgh, and leaving with the detail that the girl was scared? I NEED MORE INFORMATION, PLEASE!!!

Hahahahaha, I love that they girls all have such a strong bond, dancing in front of everyone and not giving a shit. I love it so much!!!
And Helena sending the video to Bri is just asking for her to be made fun of for the end of time :P

Loved the insight into Tim's mind... interesting to see what that head is dreaming up, and how he is trying to convince himself not to do anything with Hels, but we all know (read as: hope) that will change :P

Oh, why is jealous Tim so gosh darn sexy? Oh my!
And Nero catching him out on it is just going to send him into denial! Shut your pretty face, Nero!!!

Lmao I love their debates about movies and how she sets them in their places . Awe that was mighty sweet of Tim! Hahaha I think she’ll like Zacky new lady too. Loved it!

That's cute that she was recognised and not just for who her brother is... that would be a nice feeling. And she was so sweet, too!

"Oh." Evie paused, adding a healthy dose of Jack to her cola. "I still want pictures." - Hahaha! Of course she's not deterred! I wouldn't be either.

"The old-school animalistic style, or the more recent pretty-boy version?"

"Old-school," Helena and Evie said together. - Yeah... old school. No pretty boy vampires. Hahaha.

"Helena considers him frightening because he is able to disguise his true nature until it's already too late," Nero said, his dark eyes tracking Tim, who had gone to the refrigerator for a beer. "And yet, she finds him sexually attractive."

Popping the top off a bottle, Tim faced them and leaned against the counter. Helena noticed his gaze locking with Nero's for maybe half a second. - Oooh!!! That is so telling in of itself... argh! You're teasing us... little bits of hints. Argh!

I love that she wants him to watch movies with them... but then tries to keep as much space as possible when she sits next to him. She's hilarious! Hahaha. She wants to be around him, but she doesn't want to be around him...

Naww, she fell asleep curled up against him and he didn't want to disturb her... So damn cute!!

And Zacky's girlfriend sounds cute! Well, soon to be girlfriend. Haha.

Argh... I know she had to go to bed... but whyyyy?! Couldn't she have just curled up with Tim and gone back to sleep? I think that's reasonable! It's just a cuddle between boss and employee... singer/guitarist and drummer... potential sexy time friends?! *humph!* *pouts and sulks*

OH MY GOD!!! VAMPIRE MOVIE NIGHT!!!
Stroke of PURE GENIUS!!!
And could Tim be any more cute?! Letting her rest on his shoulder while he answered emails? Gah, I love him! :P
Some very interested pointed lines here that I 100% dug!
"Helena considers him frightening because he is able to disguise his true nature until it's already too late," Nero said, his dark eyes tracking Tim, who had gone to the refrigerator for a beer
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm, I wonder why he thought that was such a perfect way to sum it all up? :P
Gah, I freaking love this story!! The slow build is KILLING ME!!!!

Loved it!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I’m so glad he gets such a good reception and that it was amazing!

@ Vixyn of Shadows

Myles said it was the best show of the tour, and I know bands almost always say that, but he literally had to stop because the crowd was so loud. He just stood there and let us cheer for a while. Lol. But he gets that reaction at The Tabernacle every time, whether with Slash or Alter Bridge We do love our Myles down here. And Slash, I guess

Sounds like her DJing night is going to have a very happy night cap . Lmao of course ya gotta blame the sibs for stuff. Ugh Nero he just seems to dampen her moods a little. Loved it!

It looked epic! Glad it was all that you wanted and more

Loved the update. I can't wait to see more!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Yup, just listened to it and hot damnnnnn!!!! I am now super eagerly awaiting the next update!

@ Damsel of Darkness

Älskling means "sweetheart." I tried to only use a couple of cute pet names in this story, but älskling was one of Sas's favorites in my other Tim story. Haha.

If you get the chance, listen to "(This Is My) Elephant." The way he sings it only adds to the sexy that is that moment

So... I was gonna read this when I got home, but I couldn't wait. It's okay, I ate lunch at my desk, so I earned some more reading time!

I love Helena's thought that she was forcing Tim to come out, as if it wasn't something he would want to do. To be fair, she didn't force him... just asked him to come. He could've said no--theoretically! Hahaha.

"Min dam." - CUTE!

I keep forgetting the meaning to words... älskling? I assume it's one of the cute pet names... I need to make a cheat sheet or something! Hahaha

Helena was totally surprised when he pressed a kiss to her cheek at the exact instant she snapped the picture. - NAWW! So adorable.

Tim shifted, positioning himself behind her and resting his hands on her hips. Helena's breath caught in her throat, her muscles tensing at his proximity. - ooooh!!!

"So you hear a little story about nothing more to tell," Tim intoned softly, his lips now brushing her ear and causing shivers down her spine. - Phew!!! Jesus! Why did it just suddenly get so hot in my office? *fans self*

Ignoring the messages, Helena began to move as Sköld transitioned into "Make a Star" by Dope Stars Inc. She pretended it was natural, that she was barely aware of Tim, that her butt pushing gently against his groin was an accident.

He didn't react, not that she'd expected him to. He reached around her for his Heineken and for the duration of a single heartbeat, the front of his body was firmly aligned to the back of hers. That intoxicating cologne he always wore tickled her nose. - Such a few short lines... but damn! So much sexual tension!

Oh, man... Drew! Way to kill the moment. Argh. Hahaha. I'm sure she would've been happy with a mailed cheque, right? In favour of the amazingly teasing and flirty banter that she had going on with Tim. Argh. Hahaha.

Oh, Helena... don't worry about Nero. Worry about the sexy guy who is leading you back to his hotel... nevermind that it's also her hotel.

I agree with Sas, midnight naked swimming is so necessary for the next chapter! You're killing me with the tension! Gah!

HAhahahahah, Rob and Danny looping their arms through the girl's to imitate Tim made me actually LOL!!! So funny!!! Can just see their cheeky faces :P

Oh man, that DJ booth was getting STEAMY!! *fans self*
I know you warned me, but DAMN!
And their flirty banter at the end?! THERE BETTER BE MIDNIGHT NAKED SWIMMING! :P

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Yup, definitely cute!! Glasses just work... hahaha