The Injured Fawn - Comments

OKay, so Pheno pointed me here saying I had to read this.
I looked at the synopsis, and thought 'I'll just wait for all three parts. There are two up already, I can wait'.
Lol. Sas cannot wait. Sas is very shit at waiting :P

So I read the two chapters. HOLY SHIT! I was unprepared.
I, like Pheno, am not really into slash, but god damn do those two fit together well!!! URRRGHHHHH
I don't know how I am going to survive the next chapter. Mark me as dead.

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I’m sorry. I didn’t want to catch you in a bad moment with this 2nd post. But with the last part due Christmas Eve(and I am talking Australian time), I had to make sure to have you simmer down again before I shall conclude this slow-burning saga

So I was sitting downstairs, watching TV, and I just so happened to see you'd updated. I'll be honest with you -- I have no idea what happened on the show that was on because I was so absorbed in this.

I actually like the way Till just kinda hung around at first without asserting any kind of dominance. I imagine Lyla would be drowning in the sheer masculinity of these two. Alpha males, both of them, yes?

Yes. Give her ALL the vodka! Drunken minds speak sober thoughts...and actions, apparently

She is quite cheeky! But you know what they say: dynamite comes in small packages

This is a rather slow burn. I mean, given the timeframe it's not, but Richard is being very patient, all things considered.

And he LET Till turn her head?!?! Wooowwww. Oh well. He knows he's gonna get his. Till could break me in half and I'd still jump all over Richard

Look at Till being laid back instead of rough and aggressive! To be fair, I think they are both concerned about frightening their Fawn away. Especially given that Richard has decided he will stop if she seems too uncomfortable. So sweet!

Ugh. Whyyyyyy is it so sexy when Till speaks German?! It's not even an appealing language! I mean, you know this! We've had this conversation!

And you were right. That line -- "Already drooling for my big, hard dick"..... The thing is, I can 100% hear him saying that. Just seems to fit his mannerisms.

Push Richard down and hop on it! GET IT, LYLA!

Till is definitely speaking German on purpose now. And I don't blame her for telling him to join in or leave. There would be something weird about him watching and doing nothing but offering commentary Like a sports announcer, but in the bedroom.

Okay. So. You know. I don't normally do slash. But I can see them kissing. You're very right: the homo-erotic vibe is strong in this band. And I would happily watch them making out It is better to be dragged in as well, though.

This is so good! I'm biased, but still. I welcome sweet, sweet death

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
...you are on to something: part two and three just MIGHT kill you! It'll be a pleasant death though, right? Just clear your browser history before, so the cops don't come knocking on my door?

Hey! Dark Secret Love didn't corrupt you! Well. Maybe a little. But you're enjoying being corrupted

I can definitely see them being protective, especially since I know they accompanied some fans to a hospital once after they were hurt at one of their shows (a pyro incident). I'm sure there were legalities involved, too, but still.

Till made that guy look like even more of an asshole! Go, Grumpy Pants!

If I earned four stitches at a Rammstein show, you'd better believe I'd want to meet the band! And finding Richard alone? Hello, Fate!

Awe. She can't take a shot at his age. I don't think that's allowed if you want to do the person you're talking about Vodka is a good suggestion. It will help her pain -- and her nerves.

OH. MY. GOD.

She SUCKED HIS FINGERS! I would never have the lady balls to do that. Holy...

And there goes Richard's restraint. Awesome. I love that he poured more vodka down her (and on her). At least he didn't waste it, either

He is built very nicely for an old dude.

Ugghhhhh. Soooo many belts! How patient would you have to be to get naked with Richard? Like, seriously.

Nope. No. Nuh-uh. Audiences are bad. And Till... He's so scary and sexy. I think I would be self-conscious around him, just on principle. But jeez, he is also impossibly appealing.

He certainly doesn't have to leave!!!!!!

Now I want to get injured at a Rammstein show, if this is the reward! Hahahaha!

I love it already! It's perfect! Thank you!!!!! Parts 2 and 3 literally might kill me...