I’m hooked! These chapters flow so smoothly, I can’t wait for an update!
January 26th, 2020 at 08:53am
Masterpiece Theater - Comments
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Well, as an eager reader, I'm glad you're too excited. Lol. But as a writer, I definitely understand the need to space your chapters so you don't end up without anything pre-written...January 25th, 2020 at 10:02pm
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@ PhenoBarbiDoll
You're welcome! I'm glad you're excited about it! I have the first ten chapters written. I'm trying to space them out but I'm too excited.January 25th, 2020 at 08:58pm -
I love the start. Brian is such a gentleman, it would be hard not to be charmed by his attempts to apologize for knocking her drink over. Though I would be wary of someone handing over $300 without batting an eye, too. Lol.
Jimmy is great.
He wouldn't be a best friend if he didn't give Bri a hard time! That's what BFFs are for!
And so they meet again
She is gonna be so blindsided when she figures out who he is...she might even be pissed he didn't tell her. I can't blame him, because he's obviously used to people changing in response to his fame.
I'm glad she agreed to have coffee. And as annoyed as I already am with Ali, she has a point and Laurel clearly needs a push. Sweet of Brian to make sure it was okay to call after he already had her number: he could have just kept being somewhat desperate, like when he followed her at the bar. Haha.
I'm excited for this! Thanks for reaching out!January 25th, 2020 at 08:52pm
