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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ ProverbofHell

    You can't blame her, though. He's repeating a pattern she's seen before.

    @ Vintage Vengeance

    Thank you so much! I'll try not to keep y'all in suspense for too long Mr. Green
    April 22nd, 2021 at 04:56pm
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    I do agree with ProverbofHell when she says it can be very innocent, mostly because Till has never lied before... But I’m not gonna lie, my heart dropped to the bottom of my stomach when there was a picture, that included with the less frequent phone calls is making my spidey senses tingle.

    But this is an amazing story and I’ve been addicted to reading all three since Sunday! It seems very realistic and you’re a great author!
    April 22nd, 2021 at 11:53am
  • ProverbofHell

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    She’s doing it again, jumping to conclusions with one picture. Innocent at that.
    Sophia and him may not have had contact since they’re “split”, but they didn’t part as enemies or in fight, so having a “female friend” backstage and holding her close after not having seen for a while can be very innocent.

    Hope she doesn’t accuse him of cheating or ignored him. I am hoping there is a normal explanation for this. She’s practically looking for there to be an issue.
    April 22nd, 2021 at 07:51am
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    Loved it
    April 15th, 2021 at 03:37am
  • ProverbofHell

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    I love how Kori puts all of it into perspective and hence suggesting, she feels that Till is serious. With all the fears and warnings over the years, London really needed to hear this, even if it doesn’t mean that she will truly believe it deep inside.

    Till is staking his claim, I don’t think he’s trying to hurt Paul or to make him suffer. In the end, he is correct about everything he said. He is so pragmatic and black/ white, I do love that about him.
    But with Lo’s pat and how she always cared so much how she was viewed in addition to Paul having been a close confidant...it’s hard to just “get over it”.

    I can begin to see clouds over Till’s head, I don’t think he expected to see her this torn up over Paul...his own insecurities will start to crawl to the surface when having him isn’t enough to make her “happy” and is instead dwelling on past “mistakes”.

    Loved it, as always!
    ...and yes: it totally was safe to read at work Mr. Green
    April 8th, 2021 at 05:15am
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    Loved it
    April 8th, 2021 at 02:34am
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    @ StreetWaves

    Thank you!
    April 4th, 2021 at 01:35am
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    Loved these past few chapters!
    April 3rd, 2021 at 04:15pm
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    Loved these past few chapters!
    April 3rd, 2021 at 04:15pm
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    April 1st, 2021 at 06:42pm
  • ProverbofHell

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    ...can’t even comment on this right now Shocked Ighhhhh, shouldn’t have waited until bedtime to read this dammit!
    April 1st, 2021 at 02:26pm
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    @ ProverbofHell

    Glad you actually listened this time! lmfao
    And I wish it could always be this perfect, but there are still unresolved issues waiting to blindside them...
    March 24th, 2021 at 09:13am
  • ProverbofHell

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    I don’t care what anyone says: can we please keep Till & Lo’ like this forever? It’s not like we’d get bored, there’ll always be moments of tension and confusion and insecurity...but I simply adore them when they’re this comfortable around each other. No second guessing or questioning motives.

    Loved this chapter very much and very grateful for having heeded your warning that this was NSFW Wink
    March 24th, 2021 at 08:19am
  • ProverbofHell

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    I am happy, that Lo’s mom was able to let her doubts fade away upon seeing just how much the only thought of Till can make her smile! I had feared the opposite, so am relieved that she...accepts him?

    Nawhhhh...and yes: it was safe to read at work! Thank Gods for that! I adore the description of those candids. Seeing a situation from an outside POV really puts a different light on things, and her actually seeing the way he looks at her in that one shot...? Makes all the difference.

    Loved it!
    March 18th, 2021 at 12:09am
  • JustDuckie

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    Richard is such a whiney little bitch, isn’t he? Lol.
    March 10th, 2021 at 07:50pm
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    March 10th, 2021 at 03:02am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ AlcoholicCasper

    Maybe I'll start letting it go. After all, I kinda have with the new Richard/Till story...
    March 3rd, 2021 at 08:05pm
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll

    Am I the only one not seeing the downside to that???? lmfao
    March 3rd, 2021 at 06:16pm
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    @ AlcoholicCasper

    I know! I'm sorry! Lol. Some of these chapters would probably be over 3000 words if I didn't cut them off tehe
    March 3rd, 2021 at 03:27pm
  • JustDuckie

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    Just when it was getting good too!!!! Lol
    March 3rd, 2021 at 09:11am