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Ahhhh, good to see that picture made it just in time before the update was posted

Going back to the update before this, I am somewhat surprised that Richard would bring up his daughter & Oli as an example on why her sleeping with her friend’s dad is not as bad as she thinks. And that Nicole has been smooth enough so Leonore hasn’t caught on to it, yet. Then again…I totally understand: who wouldn’t wanna sleep with Oli!

Richard is such a gentle lover, very much caring for the way he makes the other party feel. Such a playful man…and sexy at the same time.

Interesting to see how Leonore’s character is very different to your female leads in others, not shy about her sexual attraction to Till while boning his guitarist. This is at least the second time she is very much implying she wouldn’t mind experiencing Till’s much talked-about rougher type of sexual conduct! “Promises,promises.” ? Pretty bold taunt for a little lady if you ask me!

Loved it! Glad I realised the update was through rather fast this time…where’s my medal!

I feel like if Till was going to kill someone he'd 100% go the "slow and painful" route. And have far too much fun with torturing his victims. 100% The Frozen Ground type shit, hunting his victims down in the woods like they were an animal.

Whelp, guess I should grab that glass of Tequila Rose after that.

@ AlcoholicCasper

He didn't get any more naked than she was! Lol. Everyone was still wearing undies! She'll survive...

@ Vintage Vengeance

I swear, we must totally share a hotness meter, because I'll write something I think is hot and be like "I hope my readers get it," and then BAM! You get on here and comment on the exact thing I think is so fucking hot!!!!!!

And Nicole will live! Richard didn't get totally naked and Nic was in her undies, too!

Thank you so much for your continued support!

Oh my god! You brought the whole “listening to music” when having sex to a whole new level my friend! How fucking hot is that!? With Richard none the less!!! I almost combusted when I read that last part.

I say this every time but another great update! The whole chapter was just 10/10 from the beginning. I’m starting to say fuck Nicole, let Leonore and Richard live their lives

I agree with AlcoholicCasper that it must’ve been awkward to see your dad strip, but CLOSE YOUR EYES NICOLE! Look at the other men in the hot tub, Leonore is living her hot girl summer dreams!

God bless you for these stories is all I’m gonna say! Hope you’re doing well!

WHO’S GOING TO WALK INTO THE ROOM TO CATCH THEM IN THE ACT OR POST COITUS?!?!? Aaaahhhhhhh!!!!

I mean, obviously as his daughter, Nicole had no desire to watch her dad strip so she clearly had to nip that in the bud.

Loved it.

I knew from reading the first chapter that this was gonna be a dark and fucked up story, which i'm excited for..

But being the Till Lindemann fangirl that I am, I am really hoping that the whole "Till Lindemann proposing and making Leonore move to Berlin" thing is foreshadowing.. just kidding.. kind of.. hahahaha ha ha ha...

I am really excited to see where this goes and I don't know if I've said this before but I really feel like Nicole knows at least something about the whole Richard/Till situation that you're eluding to, hmm..

Also, what a great way to wake up! I wouldn't mind feeling Richards bare chest against my back when I wake up

I mean, duh. Of course he is. We're not blind, lol. I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!!!!!!

Loved it

@ Vintage Vengeance

I'm so glad you thought his need for consent was sexy, because I just couldn't write him being selfish and not giving a fuck about what she wanted or if she really wanted it at all. He had to be sure. He's 52 and can get willing partners whenever he wants, so it's not as if he's desperate. Lol. But I wanted him to be a very attentive partner. It's important for what happens later

When I saw the "Sexual Content" underneath the chapter I just KNEW I had to save it for after work, and boy was I not dissapointed!

Why is Richard insistent approval for consent so sexy? I feel like that was almost better than the actual thing, almost.

But it finally happened.. somewhat and I'm super happy - Am I nervous to hear about what Nicole is gonna say about the whole thing when she finds out? Is she gonna find out!? Who knows, I've learned to never trust my own personal emotions or feelings when it comes to your writing because you write characters so good that in times where I would do the opposite I find myself pretty glad that the person in the story did what they did.

Anyway, another amazing update! I'm gonna keep saying this but this is so good!

Whelp, I think I need a cold shower after that

@ ProverbofHell

I'm just gonna stop telling you anything

Well...I hate to say it, but you know me too well: you warned me and I didn't listen!
Due to that, I will need to re-read it again once I have LEFT work and can appreciate it more

@ ProverbofHell

I would view it as the personal questions dictate his approach. He needs to know what he's dealing with before he tries to get her naked. Most people would have more satisfactory sex if they knew, well, anything about their partners. Not to mention she's only 20. Makes sense he would wonder about her history and how limited her experience is. The IDGAF approach comes later, from exactly who you think would approach sex that way. Lol.

I miss Knaack Club so much So many Friday/Saturday nights of my late teens/ early adult life were spent there!

He’s got her right where he wants her, though I think those personal questions would have made my alarm bells going off in that situation!

A week is still a hell of a lot longer than I would have lasted, so props to her.