You know what would be a great ending? Mel really DOES kill Gerard. Nobody would suspect it and you could have an ending scene of her with tears in her eyes while she's walking away from his body.
No. No you did not have me fooled. Then again, hardly anybody does. By the cafe scene I knew it was either going to be either Frank or Gerard, and by the time she was going to bed the first night on the bus, it was obvious it was going to be Gerard. You're very good, a little rushed and a little obvious, but there is actual talent here.
Updateeee!!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please!!!!!!!!! I loved the phone ransom part in the beginning. I think I died a little from laughing. I realllllyyyyy like this story!!!!!!!
Back. :) No promises, due to this being my Senior year and my being swamped with school work. But I know where I'm going now and would appreciate any comments/suggestions/whatever. I'm going to try to update once a week, but don't hold me to it. Haha.
Dear God, I fee like shooting you. :evil: How could you...? I LOVED this story. It was addicting [read all 14 chapters in one go]. I'm truely sad that I don't get to find out what would've happened. :cry: BUT. You are an amazing writer. I've never read a band fan fiction before, because they never caught my attention. But your story did. Truely inspiring.
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M DYING!!!! I SWEAR!!!!! THIS STORY SHOULD B MADE INTO A MOVIE!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE WRITE!!!!!! :D:D:D oh yeah, and LOVE Draco Malfoy's Dirty Little Secret! :D:D:D:D
I'm going to the lake this weekend, sorry guys! But I'll update ASAP when I get back in the middle of next week! Thank you for your comments and subscriptions!