The end of Chapter 14 almost made me cry. My heart like, stopped when I found out it was Gerard she had to kill. Plus, Jimmy getting all mad.... "Either you kill Gerard Way by the end of the week, or I will." Woooow. I almost freaked right there. I wanna read more though. And during this whole time I was listening to SKILLET and theirs songs only make my heart beat faster! xD So, it didn't help when reading this chapter. xD And the other chapters were amazing, as well. I've been wanting to write a story like this for a while now but my mom doesn't approve of me writing stories.... Which makes me mad that she can't support me...But, yeah... Oh, well.
You know what I want to happen in the story? I want Mel to come clean to MCR and warn them about the firm. She ends up not killing MCR but may or may not kill Jimmy or Paul. But that would be too good to be true xD please update, I Love this!
Okay, so I read the comment above me. Dude...there are only three explinations. One, I misread something. Two, I missed something. Or tres, it hasn't been said yet—Gerard is the one who she's supposed to kill?
Though, it is a little obvious. -Hits head on wall furiously-
I love this story!!! Sorry I just commented now, but I wanted to read the whole story all at once (only read today but subscribed a few days ago, because I found the plot very interesting) and I gotta say : it's great! I think she'll end up with Gerard and giving up on the mission. Just have that feeling. And though Frank is sweet and all, I can't imagine her having the same feelings she has towards Gerard to Frank. And what has Gerard been up to? I hope he gives up drinking, but what would be awesome is Melanie helping Gerard sobering up and that's what makes her realize he's a great guy and fall in love and give up on her killing mission >=D or maybe I just read too many happy endings. Haha anyway update soon x)