The Tears of Time - Comments

woa hunni very good! lmao i nearly said your name there but i knows you dont want it revealed mwahahah
how on earth do you get so many comment m'dear!?
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Wow. That was the best nine hours in front of a comptuer. EVER! It's currently 1:08 AM as I type this and am mostly in shock. I really love this story. Amazing. And, well, every one else said what I would have said so, basically...ditto!!!!!
I love you!
-Zandra-

I was going to wait until I finished, but I just wanted to say a quick little something: first of all, this story is absolutel golden. Seek a publisher.
Second, The broadswod bit was wonderful. Very creative.
The only thing a bit confusing was how Gabriel and Lucifer seem to be attracted to Ella - Gabriel expecially. Maybe it will be explained as I continue with the story (I'm on chapter twenty at this point) but maybe would could add in something focusing on Gabriel's feelings for Ella. Unless you wanted it like that - in which case, ignore me. XDXD
On to the last 11 chapters!!!

WE HAVE HIT THREE STARS PEOPLE!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:

Wow
That's probably all that I can say at the moment, seeing as my mind is reeling from that fantastic ending.
This story is one of the best written I have EVER read.
You told me to leave con-crit, but I can't, cuz I can't find anything wrong. You wrote this wonderfully.
And now, I am going to read ur other stories >.<
Brava! -claps-

This is simply breathtaking, as I've told you.
But you deserve infinite comments :)

Let me get this straight. You can clarify this in your FAQ.
She killed the world but then she was 're-born'?

Superb ending :) an the Smurf has got it right.

what an amazing end! you are so talented!

Oh my.

So you definitely deserve a bunch of these:



For making the most twisted ending I've ever read. So it was like... I'm still trying to wrap my head around it. It was just so... amazing. I teared up at it, knowing it was coming as well. I wouldn't have wanted to read it any other way. I suppose the end had to come, then. You did a great job at finishing it, cause you know some endings go wrong. (How dare you do that to Raphael and Ella! :cheese: )

Anyways, enough of that ranting...

I heard a rumour that today the world was going to end (in reality; my sister told me yesterday and now you posted this :cheese: ). And your story just made me even more afraid. But I dunno, sometimes I think that mankind does deserve the kind of ending that you described.

Yeah. Anyways. Loved it!

I likes it!

Wow, thank you people. Comments make my day, eternally. :mrgreen:

You have, I'm sad to say, two chapters left. I'm not sure there's anything left to write after that. :(

But I can promise you another story soon, though I don't know what, I do know that I can't live without writing.

The way this is all written, it's all very elegant. I just love the air that it brings, it's just so... I don't know how to describe it. It's wonderful.

I can't wait for another update! :cute:

more, please.

GAH

I didn't comment sooner? I was going to yesterday. Hm, I guess I messed up. Anyways, it's a great plot! I DIDN'T SEE THE ROMANCE THING COMING! D:

I don't have any FAQ's... though I would like to know what Lucifer's favourite animal is, lol. xD

Hmmm... maybe it isn't quite so confusing. I must have answered all the questions. FAQ has changed then folks! Anything at all you want to ask me! Even if it's completely random, such as...

"Does Lucifer have a favourite animal?" which I can tell you, he does.

Thank you very much to LittleTinySmurfGirl for my first 2 questions:
How did you come up with the idea for TOT?
And
Is there going to be a sequal?

I promise to answer everything!!! Unless it's really weird... :mrgreen:

Ha obviously from your lack of questions for the FAQ it's obviously not such a confusing plot as you seem to have thought.

It's a lovely piece of writing, so very descriptive which I completely forget about in my stories, having a picture in my head I forget no one else does. I really can't pick a bone with it except those few occasional typing errors which I've messaged you about.

!lakjfdg. Must be my lucky day, another update.

New subscriber here, I'm so glad I found this story; it's unlike anything i've ever read, you're fantastic..

So I'm caught up. And this is... well, this has got to be one of the most amazing original fiction stories I've read in a long time. It's just got so many twists and turns and so much stuff I need to reread to understand... quite a plot. It's one of the most unique ones I've read.

Since I can, I'm going to say that I loved this paragraph. Everything about it stood out to me, and I thought it was incredibly descriptive.

It was like looking into a crystal, with infinite corners and showering colours, a rainbow with an entirely new spectrum. Ahead of her, Ella watched as the oak trees flickered, from grown tree to tiny sapling, though without moving. For in each gaze she could see every time that had been, was, and would be. Finally she understood the far away gaze that had been present when Time had first looked at her.

Oh jeez, with the way you left off, I'm just so... argh, I really need to read more. The end of the world?! WHAT IS HAPPENING?! Definitely the turn I was not expecting at all...

D:

So I'll just sit here and wait for other people to comment as well because this really deserves more comments. Lalalalalala.

Anyways. I really love this story. -thumbs up-

Thankies muchly! You don't know how excited I get when I see the link on my homepage saying that I have new comments! It's like a sudden clench around my heart, and then this thrill that tiingles right through my chest and into my fingers... I wonder if maybe I'm having a heart attack... :mrgreen: