Just finished reading it and I really liked it. I preferred it in the beginning though, because I think the characters were more pronounced and the scenes were over-all much btter.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVED IT!!!! AMAZING ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT STORRY WAS REALLY GOOD. WAAAAAY BETTER THEN MINE. I LOVERED IT!!!!!!! BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEW STORY TOO!!!!
OH MY GOD!! You had such a cute butt too!!! XD I loved it. That's sad. I saw that on youtube, looked painfull. Bam started to cry a little bit!!! I love it. I can't wait for the last chapter although I have to say, I'm sad it's almost over. And I'm glad that I helped you finish it well you get what I mean!!! I wovers you!!