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DON'T YOU DARE TAKE THIS ONE DOWN, RUDIE. I'LL BEAT YOU WITH A BIGSWOLLENUNICORNSTICK. IT'S AMAZING. YOU CANNOT DEPRIVE MIBBA OF IT. UNLESS YOU'RE GOING ALL EDITING/PUBLISHING WITH IT. WHICH YOU SO SHOULD. BUT. OTHERWISE. DON'TYOUDARE! IT WOULD BE TOO SAD. Just sayin'. Love you.

omgee u have same avatar as me ^ anywhoooz i love this storry and ahhh yea i havent gotten that far but its just amazinng!!

OhMehGahd; sequel? :D

ok i'm sorry i dont seem to be agreeing with everyone else...
but seriously?!?!?!?!
....after everything they'd been through... and she dies?
so she can have her happy ending and be with her mother in the end???
sheesh.. i cant believe i expected them to be together and instead i ended up crying.......

it was a great story and sorry for my whining... but i'd rather they were together in the end...
this story just proves that life's not a fairy tale...
and i find it sad when not even fairy tales get their happy endings...............

=] This was a really interesting story.

The twists were really good, as well.

I loved it. Good job.

dude....wow it was amazing. the ending was sooo unexpected..it made it seem like a realisstic story instead of the regular happy ending

WHOA. I love this one =]

WHOA. I love this one =]

As much as I hate how she died, I like the ending. Its nice, and well, perfect in its own way. I'm sad that its at its end, but satisfied that I now know the whole story. If that makes anysense.

I really enjoyed this story.
Even though there were some weird parts, it was good.
Write another one.

Truely amazing ending. It wasn't cheezy whatsoever.

Though it was sad - and nearly made me choke up tears - I loved the resolve you gave for your story. Simply... amazing.
Ha, I sound so formal to myself.

Seriously though, your story was well worth the read... and skipping my grounding.

It was just... too good for words. ^^

That was so amazing...
I was practically crying when I finished reading this...

this was an amazing story. It was a sad but perfect ending, and I've loved every second of it.

Thanks for sharing it!

I'm sorry I missed out on commenting all your updates towards the ending. I was away :(

I don't think the ending was cheesy at all. He's happy and I'm sure that she's happy wherever she is.

Your writing style is awesome, always keeping me on my toes :)

Omg it made me cry
I love it
I so still want a sequel but I'll have to settle for reading ten more times!

aww it was pretty, and I hate to see it end on a sad note but still a very well written story.
Take a bow my fine author =]

=D
*claps and cheers*

No sequal?
Whhhy?

aww..good ending..
very sad though..but...yay..he moved on..kinda.
:'[

omgno: I... I havn't been on mibba for a week maybe. And she dies...

Ohmigosh, I actually felt my throat tightening up! I never get that attached to a story! I just love your writing!!
Well, you said you have one more chapter to this story (I think) so I can't wait to read it. :crazy: