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  • a4leafclova01

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    keep the story going its really good i dont want it to end
    January 5th, 2009 at 07:39pm
  • amelie

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    *Her not or.
    xD
    January 4th, 2009 at 06:45pm
  • amelie

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    Oh, I forgot something!

    (I hope you don't mind me asking such a question. I've come to realize a lot of writers/authors/poets/et cetera, get jittery when you ask them or they fear their inspiration for the rest of the story is gone forever! [Or they think you're going to steal their plot -_-])

    Anyway, onto my question: Where and/or how did you get inspiration to write "SOLD!" and do you ever get into character? Like, have you molded a bond with your character(s)? As if they're a part of you? Lastly, who (or what) inspired the personalities of the characters?

    Oh, and, in the beginning of the story, when Lillith is walking up the stairs and falls, was it Justan's father that had reached out and touched or shoulder or like, Matthew?

    Okay, sorry if that made no sense whatsoever.
    I boggled myself writing that.
    January 4th, 2009 at 06:43pm
  • amelie

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    Sorry about never commenting this. I usually try to comment everything I read, but it seems as if every time I read "SOLD!" I'm in a hurry. (What a pathetic excuse.)

    Anyway, I really do love this.

    I'm guessing the voice in Justan's head is Lillith (I spelt her name the wrong way, didn't I?). In all honesty, I'm -in a sadistic way- I'm glad you killed her off; not every novella (actually, this would be considered a novel, with this many chapters, huh?) should have a chirpy ending.

    Can't wait for more.

    -Insert cheesy smile here-
    January 4th, 2009 at 06:34pm
  • Butterfly.COM

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    Great Story :)
    Wish She Didnt Die "/
    Update Soon Please :)
    January 4th, 2009 at 04:19pm
  • fresh-till-death

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    omg i love this story...
    although i wish Lil haddnt died, it made me cry lol
    keep going (:
    January 4th, 2009 at 08:24am
  • Missy1292

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    somehow*
    January 4th, 2009 at 08:08am
  • Missy1292

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    Oh no! is she really dead?? or is she going to come back??
    I really hope she somehoe is still alive...
    Loved the story.. :]
    January 4th, 2009 at 08:07am
  • RainbowPIG

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    AHH YOU MADE ME CRY!! DX
    THAT WAS SO SAD. T-T He cradled her body and kissed her corpse... GOD THATS SO SAD.
    Lillith CANT BE DEAD! T-T
    WTF. i lub her. <z3
    SILENT SUBERS HURRY UP AND COMMENT OR I'LL KICK YOUR ASS VIA INTERNET! D:<
    no im kidding. but please comment! <3
    January 4th, 2009 at 08:01am
  • UpforDance

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    I'm not sure wether I count or not cuz I've commented before oh well! You post the next cha pter up right now young lady!! Or you will rue the day you defied me! MUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 4th, 2009 at 07:36am
  • Dear-andDarling

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    Sorry I never comment on your amazing story.
    It really is fantastic, and I'm sad to see it go.

    You have a great talent for writing, and I hope you continue in the future.
    <3

    Can't wait for the final chapter.
    January 4th, 2009 at 06:36am
  • Jack the Ripper.

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    Sorry for not commenting, kinds just slipped my mind. Anyways I love the plotine to this story and you're writing. :]. A sequel would be awsome.x].
    January 4th, 2009 at 06:32am
  • lovinthebest

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    Never done a comment before, but I've really enjoyed the story I'm sad it's ending.
    January 4th, 2009 at 06:05am
  • eddy1

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    dude you should give it a proper ending!
    January 4th, 2009 at 05:44am
  • Kenna-Roo

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    I know how being a bitch is..ha so your story is really good.
    January 4th, 2009 at 05:37am
  • lydiajudith

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    love your story, i wanna know what happens to her!!
    does she die, update? :/
    January 4th, 2009 at 05:31am
  • sourwolf.

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    I LOVE THIS STORY
    CANT WAIT FOR THE LAST CHAP
    January 4th, 2009 at 03:15am
  • sourwolf.

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    I LOVE THIS STORY
    CANT WAIT FOR THE LAST CHAP
    January 4th, 2009 at 03:15am
  • sourwolf.

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    I LOVE THIS STORY
    CANT WAIT FOR THE LAST CHAP
    January 4th, 2009 at 03:15am
  • LolzManduhh

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    Silent subscriber. Guilty as charged. xD
    Sorry I don't comment. I use my iPod Touch
    For reading and its a real bitch to write comments
    And such. But I really love your writing. So hurry
    And post the end!!! xD
    Again sorry for the lack of commenting.
    January 4th, 2009 at 03:04am