Baby in the Closet - Comments

I love Brendon in this story... he's so cute! ^_^

Comme par normal, son proche perfectionner.

or something like that. xD

Please, please, please update this story!

the last lines of this story are adorable
one track mind?

but i'm going to subscribe :)

Please update! This story is so awesome!

i love the way you write, it's so vivid. this is going to be one of my favourites, i think =D

susie x

Oh, I love it :] I really like Ryan's character for some reason o0;
And their conversation in the car.
Anywho.
More soon? :]

This is really good. I love it so far. :)

I like the sentence "a straight beeline towards Spencer" for some reason. It really kinda made me happy inside. Dunno why. I have my issues...

I like the way you word things a lot, and I also like how I can picture every single moment. The imagery is so real, I feel like I'm almost witnessing it. I really like it.

More soon?

Please update this again soon!!!!

I really like this (:
I can't wait for more.

I like it (:

I love this!
Update when you can please.
=]

Amazing as usual!
For some reason my favorite part is where Ryan is getting Spenc to do his homework... maybe it's 'cause I always get my friends to do mine for me... or just copy theirs.
Can't wait to see how this turns out
I know it will be good though.. like the rest of your stories

I really like it so far, it's really well-written, like all your other stories I've read. You're an amazing writer.

This is awesome! Keep going please!

I'm retarded and forgot to to subscribe...

This was really good. I love how Brendon didn't have a bad reaction.

The summary got me hooked - you could make a living writing those.
The entire thing is so... beyond fanfiction, I suppose because it seems so real. Especially in the intro, with Pete trying to find out about their skeletons.
And then the reactions. Ryan like a sterotypical teenaged boy, Lexie like a 'good' Catholic, and Brendon like a horny little fucker scared of losing Ryan.
I love the Band-Aid method thing, too. :)
And the Juno-esque layout.
Ah, fuck, I like the whole thing. You are indescribable.

I really like it so far!

I love the Juno-colored layout.
&Just like all your other stories, it's amazing.

I'm in love with another story... this one ^^
<3