Just a Freak - Comments

  • Airi.

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    I'm confused...

    More soon?:cute:
    September 26th, 2008 at 11:42pm
  • discarnateXbeauty

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    what happened?? i'm so confused!!
    September 26th, 2008 at 11:10pm
  • Hair Brush

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    omgno: oh no...
    this doesn't sound good. ;o
    update soon :}
    September 26th, 2008 at 08:27pm
  • thing two

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    Omg omg omg I love this story! Wow *subscribes*
    I love the way you write it, and I love how Riley is different and has a lot of fun inner thoughts. :tehe:

    I be waiting for an update. (:
    September 26th, 2008 at 12:53am
  • purplerawr

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    Yahh... Dirk gets a chapter :D

    And what's happened to Caleb?? :'(

    I can guess at it... but I don't want to even spoil things for myself!

    Sorry, I really don't comment much, but I only check stories I'm reading occasionally (yes, I'm really bad like that) so that probably why.

    I swear this story just gets better and better...
    September 11th, 2008 at 09:40pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    I love your story.
    I love your writing style.
    I love the funness in the story.
    I love the character, Riley.
    I love you for writing this story.

    My favorite quote from the story is:

    "Dude, I have to pee. Cut the shit and speak English."

    He blinked at me in surprise and stuttered, "It's, uh, it's down the hall."


    I laugh so hard, my cheeks hurt twice the pain I experienced earlier XD
    September 4th, 2008 at 02:08pm
  • cluttermess

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    Smiley Dirks POV makes me really curious now as to what this whole thing is going to build up too...damn. Well your an amazing writer and this was a seriously good update. Can't wait for the next.
    September 2nd, 2008 at 05:28am
  • Airi.

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    This story is good.
    -subscribes-

    More?:cute:
    August 31st, 2008 at 05:49am
  • kurdt cobain.

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    i thought his bruises and stuff had to do
    with his dad or something. i. am. a. winner.
    August 30th, 2008 at 07:12pm
  • Hair Brush

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    oh damn...
    August 30th, 2008 at 03:17pm
  • love potion

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    Awe, poor Dirk. I knew his bruises had something to do with his father. He should just tell Riley. I'm sure she'll understand.

    Great job. More when you can, please.
    Smiley
    August 30th, 2008 at 02:03am
  • ella vator.

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    Sways towards violence... interesting. :XD
    August 30th, 2008 at 12:36am
  • electricgirls.

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    Wow, I love the way you write this story. The style is fantastic.
    It seems like all the characters are changing rather suddenly. Riley is less... Riley; Caleb was basically pulled out of the whole scene; Dirk seems like an asshole, but the last chapter made him seem... soft, I suppose?

    I'm subscribing and definitely looking forward to more. :]
    August 29th, 2008 at 11:56pm
  • lisamargaret

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    Hm.
    Dirk is obviously different than he originally seemed.
    And I can't wait to find out what happened with Caleb.
    August 29th, 2008 at 10:10pm
  • SimmoScandal

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    I just started reading this story not long ago.
    It's really good. I like the way it's written. It's a bit different, but I'm sure thats what you were aiming for.
    I can't wait for an update. Keep up the good work.
    August 29th, 2008 at 09:54pm
  • lisamargaret

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    I lovelovelovelove this story.
    The style it's written in, the way it's written, the plot, the characters.
    Everything.
    Hhhoolllyyy. You're doing a great job.
    August 29th, 2008 at 02:47am
  • xXKylaryenXx

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    Ha! I came back!! It si because school started... Ive been so swamped...

    but enough about me, hows my favorite author doin??
    August 28th, 2008 at 02:44am
  • Green_Day_nimrod

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    I love your story

    please write some more Nyam
    August 27th, 2008 at 04:05am
  • St_Atrocity

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    whoaa, what's with dirk? Is he on his monthly cycle or something??
    MEHH!! what's wrong with K??
    =[[
    August 25th, 2008 at 07:33am
  • Samm FTW

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    Ooh! I'm a fan girl!

    Loved the last few. I can't believe Brian's parents found out he was gay, though. I can't wait to see how that turns out. Like, whether he told them, or the counselor, or however they found out.
    August 24th, 2008 at 10:42pm