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  • StolenSerenity

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    Thanks for the feedback.
    May 19th, 2009 at 02:28am
  • Silly Box Cat.

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    I love chapters 1-10 but it starts to go a bit odd there kinda like you suddenly decided to change the plot line and it all seemed kinda less... detailed...

    But anyway apart from that I loooooooooved it Clap
    May 16th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • Silly Box Cat.

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    to be honest I thought this story was going to be really bad but I gave it a chance

    And I luuuuuuv it!! These stories are exactly the reason I joined Mibba. I luv ittttt!
    May 15th, 2009 at 01:22am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
    April 14th, 2009 at 06:17pm
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it.
    February 24th, 2009 at 09:54pm
  • StolenSerenity

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    Thx! :cute:
    January 31st, 2009 at 12:02am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it.
    January 27th, 2009 at 02:22am
  • riellybabie101

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    loved it!
    January 5th, 2009 at 05:16am
  • StolenSerenity

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    Thanks. I really appreciate ALL the comments. :D
    January 4th, 2009 at 01:24am
  • the.ugly.organ

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    loved the update, can't wait for more :)
    January 3rd, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • riellybabie101

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    loved it.cant wait for more.
    December 23rd, 2008 at 02:46am
  • the.ugly.organ

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    great chapter.
    I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that her father was talking about wanting it to have been her that died instead of her mother or maybe she had a sister/brother?
    i dont remember if you'd referenced a missing family member before, so that could have been totally redundant.

    update?!
    November 18th, 2008 at 09:05pm
  • the.ugly.organ

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    THIS STORY IS RAD.
    I honestly can't think of any valid critisism at the moment, so I probably won't be of much help in that department.
    the pace is good, as is the story line and your writing style and grammer.
    I've got absolutly no complaints.
    ...except maybe more frequent updates?XD
    November 13th, 2008 at 02:54am
  • riellybabie101

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    loved it. cant wait for the next update.
    November 11th, 2008 at 06:14pm
  • the.ugly.organ

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    this story is amazing!
    please update?
    November 8th, 2008 at 09:23pm
  • niccisayshello

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    Ohhh i really like it!!!!
    update really soon
    November 8th, 2008 at 05:35am
  • StolenSerenity

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    Thanks all. :)
    November 7th, 2008 at 07:16pm
  • riellybabie101

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    loved it, cant wait for the next one.
    November 7th, 2008 at 02:54am
  • flippinjeans

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    she slapped him lol
    July 25th, 2008 at 08:08pm
  • Asobi Seksu.

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    YaY! For updates! Can't wait
    to see more, this story is going places!! =]
    July 18th, 2008 at 07:07am
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