Okay, so I read the last couple chapters, I liked it. So I'm going back to the beginning. That sounds backward. . . anyways. Just a suggestion, you should add characters to this. Like by the comments and summary at the top of the story page. Even though this includes all FBR, I'm assuming she'll end up with one of them? Right now I'm thinking Ryan.
If I could subscribe ten more times sis, I so would! (I hella just downloaded Girl on TV right when I read the beginning part)
Man, oh man. I wonder what the surprise is... Hm. Travis McCoy alllll wrapped up? ;) ness like. I fucking love you just as much as this story. (which is like, alot) I'm so glad this is back! And in full action! I love all your freakin' updates girl!
Just started reading this whole story today, didn't stop once. You're a great writer! Can't wait for the next chapter! You have earned my subscription! (:
You posted a Sisky chapter on his birthday! A chapter where he's heartbreakingly earnest, but still: \o/ And then on top of that, you managed to tie it back in to the filler chapter before this. Well done. xD
There's so much confusion in this story, and weird and chaos I love it. it's great. just WRITE MORE, y'hear? ;) though the Gabe thing threw me off, totally. I was confused. HA
Oh sisssky <3 how sweet you are to Miss Chelsea May. Nightmare, eh? Maybe this story would be more appropriately named The Chelsea May Analysis lol. Haha don't YOU work at chuck e cheese? Just a side note.
Where's Travie McCoy?!?!??!? He's still under Ramen :)
Dude, I'm jealous of her closet. Mine's way too small to hold my clothes. ._.
And gah, you had to twist the happy, Chuck E. Cheese filler into something that cut off at an unfortunate point. I wanna know what's wrong with Sisky! D:
(Not gonna lie though, I laughed like an idiot at the pimpcess thing.)
I'll be waiting, like always. Thanks for updating. ^^
Hi sis! Happy belated birthday :) I already greeted you on on FB... But I felt I should show you some love right hurrr. Mwahaha. Dude, I'm itching at my skin waiting for an update. But I know you're busy... I am too -.- I could imagine how much sloooooooweeeerr updates will be once school starts. But I srsly love this! If you never commented on Papercuts, I never would have found this! When you get the next update up, it better be like twenty five word document pages long. I'm just kidding. But I'd loooove a long ass update :)
i finally finished what you have so far of the story. i'm definitely hooked (: it's an amazing story, although it made me upset when they broke the picture. lol. please update soon! :D