The Fueled By Ramen Analysis - Comments

As you know, I am a new reader/writer on mibba, and I came across your stories after you left that bomb comment on my travie story :) I fell in love with your Brendon urie story but you insisted I read TFBRA... I definitely see a change in your writing style from one to another and I see improvement with every chaper :) I finally finished reading this story start to finish this morning and I love it :) the main, self-named, character is so bubbly wubbly :) she's a caring person and very easy to relate to. I, myself, choose to please others before myself. You have a great writing flow, it's not choppy or how do I say this? For lack of better words, it's not awkward to read. I subscribed :) and hope to seemore chapters come out this summer!!! Fueled by ramen and FILIPINOS, ftw :)

I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT 3D DORITOS!
Until you reminded me, that is. Now I want some. -.-'

Aside from my sudden case ofthe munchies nostalgia, I have no complaints about these two chapters.

And awww, Patrick.

I think you shoulddecapitate whoever broke the frame update soon! I'll be waiting. :D

I cannot tell you how much I am in love with and addicted to this story. Update soon I hope =]

love the update :D
awww thats sweet what her and Pete had :D but i cant believe they broke it :(

just found this and i love it :D im subscribing :D

Phew!
The end of the chapter before this one had me a little scared...
Yay, Ryan! (And asduigogndfklafklhdn Gabe. -.-)

Still lovin' it. :D

Cue the Handel chorus! \o/

I'm not as active as I'd like to be anymore, but when I got the email update...~squee!

Thank you!
It was short, but it was a nice pep talk. And the shortness is a promise to update. Right? :-D

But yeah, I wouldn't have logged in for just any update. This is seriously one of my favorite stories on Mibba. :3

OHMYGOD!
-squeal- -jumpjump-
:DDDDDD
you updated!
<3
man, I've been waiting for this
FOREVER!
sooo this means you're
gonna update AGAIN
and soon , right?!??
:D

FINALLY an update!!!!!!! :D
It's been what? 5429324 years since the last one? J/k :)
I'm just so excited. Awesome job and can't wait for the next one (hopefully you won't keep us in suspense for so long this time....) :p

NEW READER!!!

i love this!
cant wait for the wedding.

loving you and your filoness

xoxo
Ateh.
well i guess it makes me your ateh,
lol.

Laurah

update

I do believe that I love this story
I cannot wait for an update.

Fuck I just triple-posted didn't I? Damn phone... Hehe, sorry it was all my Blackberry's doing.

Dude you've updated this story two or three times since the last chapter I read and Mibba sends me one sub notice. Wtf, man, wtf? Rawr.

Well on the brighter note, I loved the new-ish chapters. Hehe. I love the way you tranist into new things, your vocabulary, and just how you always manage to keep the readers laughing or whatever the needed emotion is. You have this way of getting us hooked, and then not letting go. The way you can describe things so vividly without making it sound like a list is really awesome, by the way. Your storytelling is an amazing gift, so keep it close and always use it, alright?

Haha, now I'm laughing. Does it seem too obvious that I remembered your comment to me on how you were so happy finding one that was so outside the regular? Haha.

Dude you've updated this story two or three times since the last chapter I read and Mibba sends me one sub notice. Wtf, man, wtf? Rawr.

Well on the brighter note, I loved the new-ish chapters. Hehe. I love the way you tranist into new things, your vocabulary, and just how you always manage to keep the readers laughing or whatever the needed emotion is. You have this way of getting us hooked, and then not letting go. The way you can describe things so vividly without making it sound like a list is really awesome, by the way. Your storytelling is an amazing gift, so keep it close and always use it, alright?

Haha, now I'm laughing. Does it seem too obvious that I remembered your comment to me on how you were so happy finding one that was so outside the regular? Haha.

Dude you've updated this story two or three times since the last chapter I read and Mibba sends me one sub notice. Wtf, man, wtf? Rawr.

Well on the brighter note, I loved the new-ish chapters. Hehe. I love the way you tranist into new things, your vocabulary, and just how you always manage to keep the readers laughing or whatever the needed emotion is. You have this way of getting us hooked, and then not letting go. The way you can describe things so vividly without making it sound like a list is really awesome, by the way. Your storytelling is an amazing gift, so keep it close and always use it, alright?

Haha, now I'm laughing. Does it seem too obvious that I remembered your comment to me on how you were so happy finding one that was so outside the regular? Haha.

xoxo,
nikkixgoesxRAWR

P.S. Is "Ateh" really spelled with an "H"? I always thought it was "Ate" instead of "Ateh"... Then again "Ate" looks more like if I head eaten something... Oh well, I'm curious. Reply soon?

Beautiful update.
And I definitely know what you're talking about with the whole school deal; I have all Honors classes and AP English, plus a job 3 nights a week and drama rehearsals next week. It's tough for me to find time to update, as much as I'd love to do it all the time.
I'm actuallyignoring working on an English essay write now, haha.[/life story]

As I said before, amazing update, do it again whenever you can.
:]

Your story is genius.

Hey, I'm Filipino too! XD

TeaCakeLady:

chelsea may; you're amazing.
enough said.
xo

Aww, but my name isn't Chelsea May, hahah
It's Chelsea, yeah, but not Chelsea May
Come on you guys I'm not THAT uncreative xD

chelsea may; you're amazing.
enough said.
xo