June 7th, 2009 at 05:44am
*commenting*
There, update soon?
Let Me Break This Awkward Silence - Comments
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May 25th, 2009 at 03:39am
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Still loving this.May 22nd, 2009 at 09:07pm
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WUVS IT!!!May 22nd, 2009 at 09:04pm
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If I haven't already said it before, I love this story, and I loved that chapter.May 22nd, 2009 at 04:36am
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I like the update. That's okay, Luv. I know finals suck. there weren't as many mistakes though. Not many changes from the notebook version (because, yes, I did read the chapter then ^_^).May 22nd, 2009 at 03:56am
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Aww... you still haven't updated. :( Please update soon. It's been more than a month with nothing but wait. When will you come back?
~nyaaMay 18th, 2009 at 09:34am -
Eep! It's been SOOOOO! Long since you updated! [PS: New reader...]
--Subbing!--May 2nd, 2009 at 06:21am -
I love this!
*Subscribes*
:)
More soon?April 28th, 2009 at 07:27am -
I love this story!!!! <3April 12th, 2009 at 01:01am
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loves it!!!!April 6th, 2009 at 10:05pm
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update soon, loves the story :DApril 6th, 2009 at 01:19pm
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Otay, so I’m writing these comments as I go through the chapter, so I have a feeling some of these might be answered while I read, but I will post them anyway. FOR YOUR ENJOYMENT!!!!
1) Are Alyssa and Gerard playing a Houdini after their touchy-feely moment?
2) Now, just HOW fast is Mikey over the speed limit? Not that it’s important, or anything. I’m just curious.
3) Oooh… spooky… silence… *wiggles fingers in a sarcastic attempt to be scary without a black-light and her Hunch gloves*
4) Y’know, Mikey’s right. They really should be more worried about Gerard than Alyssa.
5) So, why is Mikey going to get killed later? What’d he do?
6) I think you’re looking for “deathly” not “deafly”. Deafly just doesn’t look right.
7) Yes, ‘cause an umbrella is just SO SCARY…
8) I agree with Gerard’s umbrella comment. And, yes, Ivy, that is the one and only time you will ever read/hear/see me agree with Gerard, fictional Gerard, or real Gerard.
9) Yes, Gerard. Be afraid. Be very afraid. Be extremely afraid of your fourteen year old, fictional daughter that’s better at composing songs in non-reality.
10) OH! So THAT’s why Mikey’s screwed.
11) Alrighty then. So, who’s screwed more? Gerard, or Mikey? Please let it be Gerard. I don’t like him. And I like Mikey very much.
12) *Sigh* Damien forgot to steal the sugary substances, didn’t he. I swear, I get sick, and the chore of stealing your sugar just totally diminishes in importance in that boy’s agenda… *Fades into incomprehensible muttering*
13) *Sigh* you can join me in the loverly time of having a cache of falling grades…
14) WELL, GEE! It’s about DANG time you stopped plagiarizing me! You spelled plagiarizing wrong, by the by. *Ducks and covers*April 6th, 2009 at 03:59am -
Yays!! I love your story! It's really good!! Can you PLEASE update again soon?? PLEEAASSEEEE!!!!! >.<
~nyaaMarch 21st, 2009 at 02:34am -
I love it, but too bad I couldnt take your comment virginity. lol, can't wait for moreMarch 7th, 2009 at 10:00pm
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Lol, Ivy. Was that why you asked me about that at lunch? 'Cause then it makes sense. I thought you were just random.
ANYWHOO!!!
I thought the addition to the chapter was good, but you need to check your Italicizes. You screwed up for a good ten paragraphs. But I liked the funeral description.March 2nd, 2009 at 02:03am -
Loved the update. I'm curious about what you gave up for lent, though, after I saw the author's note...March 1st, 2009 at 01:05am
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awwwwwwwwws wuvs it!February 28th, 2009 at 03:17pm
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you updated yes...and update soon and that was an awesome chapter!February 28th, 2009 at 05:49am
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you have to update soon!!!February 28th, 2009 at 05:34am
mikey... but can you please update more? <3
~nyaa....