Objective Promiscuity - Comments

Wooow!
This was soo good : )
I loved it to pieces. Rydon always is the best medicine for when you're sick haha -cough-
It was inspiring.. I think I'm going to go write now haha.
This was the sex < 33

This is really good. It's a really complex story that appears simple, I love it. (:
xo

I just read this story, and I am blown away by your talent.
To write a story that is such an anti-romance, but still fuffy enough to make me go "awh!" at the end - beautiful.

You have a magnificent talent. Please keep writing?

Aww, that was the most sexual story I have ever read, And the most I have ever awwed at a sex story! lol
It was so good tho!!!!

wow.
i usually don't read ryden at all, but this...
this was just brilliant.

wow. that was really fresh, i've never read anything quite like that one before.
I liked it.
beautiful job, as usual.

Beautiful. As always.

This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. Ever. I love it. And the ending made me a little teary, I'm not gonna lie =-]

That was amazingly written. I enjoyed reading it.

It's definitely a different perception of Ryden, but still sweet all the same. I liked how the characters changed as the story progressed. Like, I loved how Ryan got mad at Brendan for fucking Jon. Definitely one of my favorite parts.

Anyways, I loved it. Adding it to my subscriptions/favorites.

EDIT:: And oh yeah. The bandwidth is exceeded on your banner. Obviously, someone likes your banners enough. xD

I will not lie, that was probably the most AMAZING story i've ever read.
It actually made me think, and it was so much more than sex.
I honestly felt bad for Ryan and Brendon =(
The ending was perfect, and Ryan was finally happy =D

Wowzers.

. _ . I never thought I would read this.
But I did. And wow.
I don't have anything to say but wow.
You know I hate Pete and Patrick with anyone who isn't eachother, but I read this anyway. And frankly, I liked it more than the first story you wrote that I told you you should name Satan. :'D

The sex was more than just sex, to me.
It was like... I don't know, I felt really bad for Ryan, having to do this.
And I felt horrible for Brendon, loving Ryan so much and having the feelings not quite returned yet.

I love how Pete and Patrick were okay.
I would have cut you if they weren't, but they were.
YAY OTP WAS GOOD YAY. <333

And I love the end.
How they ended up together and everything just worked.
It was perfect.

druscilla; day one.:

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I won't be so presumptious as to say I know what this story is all about, but I do believe I 'get' it.
I'm not entirely sure to explain what appeals to me about this story.
I like that the tone never changes. I like that it's not over-dramatic and I like that it is told in a way that is easy to understand, but it's not simple.
The way I see it, it's similar to the total destruction before you can be whole, but that might be me just placing my own meanings on it.
Either way, I do like that there is a deeper side to it that causes the reader to think. The best stories are the ones that keep you thinking about it after you've finished.
My favorite lines:

He didn’t exactly like being pushed down toward someone’s cock, even if that was his only goal for the evening.

for a second longer than was probably appropriate for the situation.

he had actually moaned

The former was nice but the latter was better.

relishing in the prospect of finally being able to make noise. Brendon, only Brendon.

He couldn’t stand the thought of being the only one in the room to lose control.

He didn’t know if that point would signify him losing control completely or if he would finally tell Brendon ‘yes’.

the louder you speak, the more your voice shakes.

with a note of finality and beginning.

the moment he’d been waiting for since he lost his virginity on that pull-out couch.

That was beautiful.
The whole thing.
The imagery, the complicated relationships.
Gah.
And that ending was perfect - it was really the perfect picture of love.
"Blow me."
I had to restrain myself from clapping and cheering.
It was long, but totally worth reading.
You are amazing, Dru.

New story.
Multiple pairings, underlying Ryden.
4460 words.
About a month in the works.
Let me know what you think.
Lots of sex, but all R.

Happy [?] reading!

xoxox
-Dru