Linger - Comments

YAY! thanks for letting me know about the update!

Brian can talk! lol
loved it!
more soon?

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
as usual :)
I srsly love where you're heading with this.
Update soon, savvy?

Tarot readings are freaky! Awesome update

Why am I scared? Lol! I feel like I could propper scream! lol. Im such a loser!
I know I hate it when people say this, but PLEASE I need to read more!

This is too great. And your reasearch was very well done!
I'm looking forward to reading more!

As for me, I'm seeing Beloved Avenged Sevenfold in
concert tomorrow! =DD

OMFG! I loved it!!!! Update again!

Too great. I can't wait for another upadte!

Love this story so so so much...
Kinda spooky but that how we like 'em

:D

So glad you're back. I loved the newest chapter, and it came just in time for my birthday, so thanks!

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY.

good job =]

Wicked awesome chapter hun. Like serously. I cant wait untill you update again!

Oh my Gee! I effing love this! You have yourself a brand new reader!

Mmm, We know it's Brian's locker.
And I find it funny how she's becoming just like him.
Living in his house, friends with his friends.
It's a reallyy original story.
More soon, yes?

AH LOVED IT!

Do you know, this is one of my favorites?

She was left sitting on her porch steps, confused and curious with only the whistling breeze and the smiling photographic memory of a deceased boy to keep her company.

I really liked that sentence. It was creepy and sad and mysterious all at the same time. :cute:

“Here,” Jayden smiled, stopping in front of her locker and beginning to turn the combination. She saw Johnny’s eyes widen slightly before his resolve returned, his now familiar smile back on his face. She then looked at Carmen, who had a somewhat stunned expression on her face.

Ooh, I bet it's Brian's locker; that's why they're so freaked! It's like she's taking over his life, kind of. She lives in his house, and she's getting to know his friends...God. I love this story.

There was an human shaped indentation running along its length, as though someone had been laying on it.

AHH! GHOST-BRIAN IS SO TOTALLY IN THE BED WITH HER!
Wow, I really didn't mean for that to sound so dirty. :tehe:

It was still stuck, the numbers flashing in the darkness - 03:29AM.
That time is going to drive me crazy until I find out what it signifies. It's obviously important; I just don't know why.

I really hope to see more soon! :D

whoaa this is amazingg!
you put so muchh details about that thing (or Brian's ghost) being there and thats just amazingg!
it freaked me out a little about the t.v. and the bed thing and that made me love it! xD
I soo freaking subscribing and I'll be waiting for your update.
it is really good keep it up! :D

loved it!
more soon?

GAH!
more!

This story is unique... I need more of it :|
Can't wait for you to come back and write
*subscribes*