Linger - Comments

The plot thickens.... I can't wait until you get back! Then things will really start hitting the fan. Love your work. Rest, relax, and enjoy yourself.

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Oh my god. Leah. I LOVE YOU!! This story is so amazing, I'm serious. :] I'm not sure if I'll talk to you before you leave for your trip but have fun!! :]

This Is Really Good Story!!!!

Ooh! I really liked this chapter! Your descriptions of the guys were simply spot-on. I especially liked Johnny's:

“This is Johnny, but we just call him short shit.”

And I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how Jayden reacts to the news that the boy she saw that morning is dead. :D

I reallyy love your style of writing.
And I love how everything seems to flow into one another.
I also love the fact that she knows about Brian, now.
Woot :)
I can't wait for your next update!
xo

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! I freakin love this story!!! It just keeps getting better and better!

Bummer!
But I'll still stick around :]
Great update!

I absoloutely adore this!
Can't wait for more!

Omg, more soooooon. Sooooon. You're an amazing writer.

wow, this story has a totally different element to it and i love it. it freaks me out slightly, what with the door opening and closing by itself and the tv flickering on and the voices. but i love it.
update when you can :D

Okay, that's creepy. Waking up to a door opening and closing by itself isn't exactly comforting. I'm getting the feeling that the guy who was in her room is Brian, even though he hasn't appeared in any chapter but the prologue so far...

I'm also really curious as to why there's a picture of him in Jayden's attic.

And that small part at the end of the chapter with the TV scared the bejezus out of me. It's like...a combination of The Ring and White Noise...both of which totally freaked me out.

I can't wait to find out what happens next! But do take your time--I know what it's like to have people hassling you for updates, and it's not enjoyable.

Whoa...that's freaky....

love it :D

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I NEED MORE!

Augh!! It was amazing, love! Like, I'm so addicted to this story is creepy. :] I might become one of your stalkers. :] Update soon babe...well, don't rush it. And how can you not be too happy with this chapter. It's sexy. :]

Take all the time you need to update. I love this story and can't wait for another update.

I really love this story.
It's as realistic as a ghost story can get, because little kids are more likely to see spirit activitiy.
OH YES. I KNOW A FEW THINGS.
Amazing Chapter.
More soon, pleaseee?
xo

Holy crap! How can you not have ten stars for this story? It is pure genius!

Love the story! Keep 'em coming please... :)

I love it babe!
Seriously I can't wait for the next chaptah!
And yay for shoutouts! Whoot!

Okay, I'm going to go update now.
Update soon!
...well, not too soon I don't want that vein in your head to burst!

Even though there's only a few chapters, I have a feeling that this story is going to be pretty awesome. I just love the way you describe things; it makes me feel like I'm literally sitting in the room with the character.
Favorite lines: The elated shouts of excited children permeated and echoed through the atmosphere, adding a positive soundtrack to the faultless surroundings.

The rafters above her head looked high and mighty, the very skeleton on the house.

I don't think I've ever read an A7X fanfiction that grabbed me right from the very beginning, but yours definitely caught my attention. *subscribes*

You're an amazing write, ya know! More soon my dear? Can't wait
to see what happens next!

Tania.