Navigate Me Through Your Body - Comments

What a beautiful way to end it. :3 I'm going to miss reading this story!

Can't believe it's over.

That was the best ending for this! So sweet. I loved this story so much! You outdid yourself! It was excellent! I think you should do a spin off about Brian and Chloe , even if it's only a one shot, I would really love to read it!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter. Oh my god I could picture it all in my head, and Zacky, Harlow and Scarletts outfits sounds absolutely perfect. I love their vows, which even bought Papa Gates to tears.

I loved this story from start to finish :-)

Love this!!

This was the sweetest chapter! I loved the last half. Zack made my heart sing..lol

Can't wait to read chapter 35. I'm sure it will be amazing to read!

"I'm...sorry. This is an awful way to spend you...birthday. I got you a...a...Rolex!" Zack laughed, wiping at Harlow's tears. Oh lord, only Harlow would blurt something like that out whilst she's in the midst of having a baby lol.

Awwww, what a perfect birthday present for Zacky :-) Damn 37 minute labour!!!! My mother takes great delight when she's telling me off for something that she was in labour with me for 36 hours lol

"Do you see what you've done!" Brian hissed pointing between Val, Chelle and Lacey. Hahahaha

Awww Scarlett sounds absolutely adorable, with Harlow's looks and Zacky's eyes. Zacky is going to be fighting on the boys with a shotgun when she hits puberty :p

ok, so I just dedicated why whole afternoon to reading this and can I just say that it is freakin' great! lol. Im not sure what the first draft of this story was like, but this is perfect! so good. I love all the characters, the humour in this is just awesome(especially Brian's character) and yeah, I just love it!!! cant wait for more! update soon!

I really like this story, it's really cute! Please update soon! :)

Yay! Baby time.

oh man I just knew that she was going to go into labour at the party lol. I can just see Zacky going into full fledged panic mode

Not long know until little baby Baker makes an appearance!!!! Can't wait to read more

I love it - Zack is so paranoid and panicky but he certainly got the wind blown out of his sails when Harlow calmly admitted that she was planning his birthday. I have a feeling that she's going to go into labour during the party

Love this honey. Zack is so cute.

<3 love it!!!

I just found this today and absolutely love it. You're a fantastic writer and I totally got into the story and I just love Harlow. Can't wait to read more :-)

I am immensely enjoying this story and can't wait to read more of it! I would also be interested in your ZV story :3

he better make it update soon

I know how Harlow feels my grandma had quadruple bypass surgery 2 weeks ago along with open heart surgery and just came home today so I know she's scared.

Zacky is going to be a great father.

Great update

Sorry, I noticed a spelling error or rather more like a word usage error. You used the word purpose in place of propose. It's common to do something like that, but I thought I'd point it out so you can change it. :D